Reviews for A Winner Is Two! Enforcer: Mr Incredible
avatarjk137 chapter 4 . 8/20/2010
Good work. You took an interesting direction, not bothering with your opponent's characterization in order to focus on the action; it didn't work out that well, but it was an interesting idea. There are a few points where Mystique does something that doesn't make sense, like pulling up Incredible's profile on the computer in the middle of his rushing her sniper nest, or when she goes back to kick him while he's down with no apparent endgame in mind (she's by no means a nice person, but she's generally written as more pragmatic than that).
avatarjk137 chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
There's some real thought and brilliance in here. What Incredible is told that they're doing, the fact that he seems convinced even though Helen already pointed out one plot hole to him, the whole thing being a set-up that Syndrome is attempting to engineer... wow.