|Reviews for the long and winding road|
| antlercrown chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I think this gives off a different aura than what you usually write.
| PenInHand9 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I loved this story. In a sad way. I haven't been keeping up with the manga at ALL (sort of got frustrated), but from the things I've heard secondhand it's not looking good for SasuSaku. I absolutely adore your writing though. Keep up the good work, anytime I see a new story from you it makes me smile.
| the general girl chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I love this, love love love love love it.
It's actually one of my favorite fics from you now. xD I really liked how you wrote Sakura's character, and played with the idea that sometimes just going around making heartfelt speeches and running into things just isn't going to be enough (coughnarutocough, the first portion pretty much describes me 90% of the time when I read the manga now). It was great seeing Sakura being written as this loyal, aloof favorite of Danzou. The whole thing (the theme, keeping the characters reasonable, the writing in general) was done very masterfully. There were some small grammatical errors here and there, but they weren't so significant that they made me enjoy the fic any less.
Great, great job!
| Hiei's Cute Girl chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Stupid Naruto, never seeing what he and Sasuke should have...
| BelieveForMe chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Wow. Again, I'm just left speechless from your writing.
I love the “Take off your mask.” quote, I read the line over and over again, cause it was just that good.
Great work (as always) can't wait for more updates!
| MyUsedRomance chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
omg. this was spectacular. truly. i just sort of flailed at everything and wow - i'm so glad you wrote it.
His response is a glare.
“Take off your mask.”
GUH. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. it just show how true to each other they want to be but can't. and yeah. I loves. Sakura fics are amazing, but this was brilliant. thank you!
| Platinum Dragoness chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Not to accuse you of plagiarism, but there's a crack-pairing fic I once read with almost exactly this plot that you might like: http: shinigami_wands/29753. html
This was also well-done, though. Good characterization of Sakura.
| LittleFoxDemon chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Nice one, I liked it a lot.
| MidniteCurse4Eternity chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
That was just really really good. It was nicely written. It was amazing and I just loved how it turned out at the end. It would be nice if this actually happens. D I liked this.
| smos chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I would like to see this happen in the canon. If only Sakura was THE MAIN character.
| don't feed the models chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
wow this was amazing. i just loved it, simply.
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Once again, you've surpassed your previous works! You've written this piece more beautifully than the others, and I absolutely adore it!
Definitely a fav.
| thinkthoughts chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
definitely well written :)
| with eyes looking up chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
i really, really liked this fic. it was very nicely put together, and it was just the right length. you managed to fit all of it into some short chapters, which is amazing. brilliant job.
my favorite would have to be the mask one. the last line just...really kind of stuck. :)
i also liked the companionship towards the end. very well played!
but i would love to see naruto's reaction; was he in on it?
| cheriper chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Wow. Massive Sakura kick-ass spotlight and Sakura-ness, whatever that is. I love that Sakura was made into a more meaningful and a lot angstier here. And I love the Sasuke-and-Sakura-have-a-deal thingy. Haha. :D