Reviews for The Giver: Alternate Ending
Olivia chapter 10 . 6/3/2015
I liked this but is the song they sing an already made song because you need to cite that somewhere if it is. If the song isn't one already, you should definitely make it one. It fits pretty well with Amazing Grace if you were to cut a little of certain verses.
Phyllis chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
write moreXD
Scissors-is-a-Nerd chapter 10 . 2/1/2012
Phew! You must have had a LOT of time on your hands!

I have a friend who really likes The Giver but I hated the ending, so after having written an alternate ending to the story myself (it was an assignment in school-my LA teacher made our class read the book), I really enjoyed this.

But... Koyuki didn't really get abused as a child, did she? ;_;
Aleyna3199 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I read this book , this year in the begining of my 7th grade school year.. yea i was kinda mad at the books ending! like what the heck happened to them ... weird o-o
GreenGirl111 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I always hated how the Giver just ended without telling you what happened, so I think it was a great idea to write the story. There actually already is a sequel called The Messenger, and one that is sort of related called Finding Blue. I don't really like the first part you wrote. I think it would have been better to be more vague when talking about Koyuki's past. Once Koyuki finds Jonas, however, I think that the story started to improve
ggggggggg4sd chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
this story is very unique, i like that about it. also i love the book The Giver, AND Keroro Gunso. So this story is an epic win. i love everything about it
EmissaryX chapter 5 . 6/9/2010
Nice one!

Update soon!
EmissaryX chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
Okay, I feel so sorry for Koyuki here..