|Reviews for The Giver: Alternate Ending|
| Phyllis chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
| RunwithscissorsXXXbattlescars chapter 10 . 2/1/2012
Phew! You must have had a LOT of time on your hands!
I have a friend who really likes The Giver but I hated the ending, so after having written an alternate ending to the story myself (it was an assignment in school-my LA teacher made our class read the book), I really enjoyed this.
But... Koyuki didn't really get abused as a child, did she? ;_;
| Aleyna3199 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
I read this book , this year in the begining of my 7th grade school year.. yea i was kinda mad at the books ending! like what the heck happened to them ... weird o-o
| GreenGirl111 chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I always hated how the Giver just ended without telling you what happened, so I think it was a great idea to write the story. There actually already is a sequel called The Messenger, and one that is sort of related called Finding Blue. I don't really like the first part you wrote. I think it would have been better to be more vague when talking about Koyuki's past. Once Koyuki finds Jonas, however, I think that the story started to improve
| ggggggggg4sd chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
this story is very unique, i like that about it. also i love the book The Giver, AND Keroro Gunso. So this story is an epic win. i love everything about it
| EmissaryX chapter 5 . 6/9/2010
| EmissaryX chapter 2 . 6/9/2010
Okay, I feel so sorry for Koyuki here..