Reviews for Shades of Grey
Dazed Blue chapter 27 . 6/12/2014
hahaha awww, I liked it! It was a cute way to conclude the night(:
natasha chapter 27 . 6/12/2014
Anonymous chapter 27 . 6/12/2014
Hi! This is a great one-shot, and adorable to read, with Maka's and Soul's "I did this and you did that" competition, haha.
One thing though- 'wherefore' means /why/ not 'where'. It's a common mistake a lot of people make, and I just thought I should let you know :)
LuciFern chapter 27 . 6/12/2014
Weird, but thoroughly enjoyable. I almost woke my husband laughing at those last lines.
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 27 . 6/11/2014
ha ha good geek fun :) and I love the way you made it seem like a real scenario when it probably just happened one bored Saturday in their house ;)
Iloveallanime18 chapter 27 . 6/11/2014
Haha, that was funny XD. Great chapter
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 26 . 5/29/2014
okay, so now for my full review of this story!

to be honest, i'm not the biggest one shot fan, especially a collaboration of them. but the way you pulled them off was amazing! I loved the way the characters went through so much different themes and sides and showed very different side of their characters :) it was amazing! while I would have put them in chronological order (to stop confusion) the way you mixed it up was so daring and pulled off really well. all in all, while I may still not like oneshots so much, you've certainly shown me a way it can be done well! Plot/Characters: A

the settings were so diverse and while they needed more imagery, you did a very good job on it none the less. i loved the different settings of the one shots and while i normally can not stand stories that break away from the main storyline (except for AU of course) the way you wrote the AU oneshots was just so well done it was hard not to love. i loved seeing the different "how they met" scenarios, especially (and only) because you kept the two of them in character. so while i would ask you to consider adding more imagery for your next settings in your next project, i will definitely give your settings in this story a resounding A

Grammar has never been my strong suit (like NEVER!) but i didn't see anything that caught MY attention which means you're probably good ;) as for the rest of the phonetics i have to say, the different styles and syntax in the one shots was a daring move. most authors stick to one voice and go it that route (which is one of the reasons i don't like one shots because they all begin to sound the same after a while) but not yours. the different styles and voices that you incorporated into your stories was time well spent for sure, because every one shot popped out and broke away from the last in it's own special way. even the ones that had similar themes but used different POV's or different styles of writing broke away from one another making each one shot exactly that :) one shot of beautiful writing! while I've already spoken about imagery and don't wish to beat the dead horse, i do want to repeat that by adding more writing devices (like imagery, similes, metaphors, personification, etc) you're great stories will become that much more greater! but as for this one, even though it lacks a little when it comes to writing devices, you still worked it perfectly for your story and i loved every minute of it! A

so my final grade for this story is a 99% A :) the only reason i gave you a 99% instead of a 100% is simply because of the lack of writing devices which does not take away much from the story and will only improve :) still though, don't let the 99 get you down, because simply the fact that i read and am reviewing a one shot compilation is amazing to me. you certainly give me hope in the oneshot and i will definitely be watching you to see what next great things you come up with next! Amazing! anyone will have a blast reading this compilation (just like i did) and thank you my friend for giving me the chance to read and review it! keep up the great writing!
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 25 . 5/29/2014
awwww cute! I wondered how he proposed and now I know :)
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 24 . 5/29/2014
MAKA-CHOP! Maka's getting married, but Soul may not be awake for it for a while -.-
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 23 . 5/29/2014
ha ha Maka wins :)
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 22 . 5/29/2014
poor Maka. their job is never easy. its just about being strong enough to keep going.
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 21 . 5/29/2014
Ox can never get a ever!
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 20 . 5/29/2014
cute. :) reminds me of a cute song :)
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 19 . 5/29/2014're gonna be in trouble in the morning.
kaitlynchosenisme chapter 18 . 5/29/2014
Maka will be ready when she's ready. it's just a wait and see kind of deal
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