|Reviews for Bad Things|
| Kanellia chapter 1 . 1/29
damn that was good :))
| Shebali chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Wish I could fav this lil piece of magic again
| Kokotheevilone chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Creepy, plotty, evil, smutty, and generally awesome. This fic is the best oneshot with Facilier I've read. You are a really good author.
| UnluckyAmulet chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Oh my god, girl, you are amazing. I loved it, and I am so happy I found this story. You write the ShadowMan so well...I hope to see more PATF stuff from you. :D
| Akar chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Alright, so I had my doubts about this fic at first. In the beginning, I was sort of rolling my eyes, thinking "Oh boy, another generic OC-author-stand in/villain fic." Of course, those doubts were pretty quickly shed. I thought this was really well-written. It has the atmosphere, the language, and paints a very good picture of Madeleine's feelings, circumstances, and attraction to Dr. Facilier. I loved how everything tied together at the end, and the last few lines were brilliant. I'll have to read your other stories now lol.
| LunaMoth116 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Wow. Where do I even begin?
I've always been fascinated by "deal with the devil" stories, which aren't common in fanfiction. Even if there are more, I can't imagine any being better than this. You've got Facilier down pat; he's as suave and slick as he is unsettling. The whole story reads like something one of the filmmakers might have written for fun as an off-screen event during the movie, right down to Tiana's cameo.
And the writing! Not only is it wonderfully atmospheric and detailed, but the flow is seamless, the dialogue spot-on and the characterizations vivid. There were some lines that made me laugh and others that sent a quiet chill down my spine, and neither ever seemed out of place. I would even categorize this as erotica rather than smut, as that particular section is delicately written, arousing without being explicit. It all goes down warm and smooth as liquor, or Facilier's name. ;)
Thank you for such a great read. :) 8-)
| The Maine Coon Cat chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Wonderful story! I love how you kept Facilier in character even with an OC- an OC that was very well-written, by the way. Excellent job.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! You are truly gifted. Not only was the story exciting and captivating, but your writing was sophisticated, delicious! Glad to see I'm not the only one who thinks the witchdoctor is, well, just about the damn sexiest villain Disney has ever created. Thank you for an amazing story, for giving me something to read and pass the time on the train (people gave me weird looks here and there as I openly became more and more aroused) and for being the best fanfic writer ever. PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING, FOR THE SAKE OF MANKIND!
| Piratechief chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Very very nice story. :)
| Shebali chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
The story is bloody brilliant, that's what it is.
You're great with language, and you gave me something to listen to as well. Thank you :)
Also good thing this was recomended on tvtropes, as I'd probably never find this story on my own. As it is, I'm so glad I got to read it, I've no proper words.
| CaliforniaStop chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
OK. Wow. This was an extraordinarily well-written fic. I mean... Wow. I'm not sure if there is a proper-English teacher term for how you've kept everything real and in the correct time period, but you certainly nailed it: the dialogue, the characters, the affectations. Wow.
I must admit though that I was skeptical twice. Once at the beginning when I thought "Oh here we go, a fangirl who wants to write about Facilier". Needless to say my doubts were quashed when it was the FASCINATION with the Shadowman that drew her to him, not some sudden affection like in many other fics (am I making sense?) After all, a man like that is very fascinating, especially to a woman of proper, high social-standing like Madeline. Women are always intrigued by what they know they shouldn't have.
Anyway. Loved her apprehension, and the way that you incorporated the unreal aspects, like the way his shadow moved around and seemed tangible. Loved it loved it loved it.
My second bout of skepticism struck when... well. They got together. I mean, don't get me wrong. It was hot and very well-written (on the table, NAUGHTY!) but then I thought - no, I'm wrong. This is just another one of THOSE fics.
OH NO WAIT!
Skepticism erased almost immediately afterwards. A body for a night, in exchange for a life? EXCELLENT! Wow. I am shocked! It wasn't just pointless, it was brilliant!
So I must say thank you. Thank you for your grammar and spelling and love of the Engrish language. It makes my eyes go YAY. And thank you for your brilliant plot, for the conflict, for the fascination, for everything. This was magnificent.
| Commander chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Hot... damn this was amazing. Porn with plot has never been this good. Just... wow. I'm speechless. Amazing job on this.
| Hermioneroxx77 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Dear god. I loved it. You're an amazing writer. Your writing is fluid, a quality many lack. I absolutely love the ending as well, and it's obvious that it can blossom into much much more. It would be great if you could write more, but I doubt you would. :)
| NicolasRaine chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
Oh, wow! This was a really good story! I loved it. The only I don't like about it is that it has to end already. I could totally see this blossoming into something more.
In fact, since you have made it clear (at least it seems clear to me) that you don't plan on continuing it, may I take a stab at it?
I would change some things, (eg: POV, heroine, etc) but the beginning plot would be about 90% the same. I would give you credit for the plot and provide to link to this piece, but I would very much like to get your permission before I do.
Would that be OK with you?
| Natsudori chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
I absolutely loved this. I haven't read anything so engaging and well-written in a very long while. Thank you.