|Reviews for The Book of Eli: Second Coming|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Learn how to spell first before you do something like this. It makes absolutely no sense.
| Morbane chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
That is the most horrible English I have ever read. Ok, so it was a translation?... so what get it right next time. Mila Kunis? Solara, damnit! Too short and way too basic, even for a bad translation. Final word? Just lame.
| Nobody chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
That had to be the most stupid piece of crap (not even worthy to be called literature or even a short story for that matter) I have ever read. For one learn how to spell and two don't write if you don't know how to.
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| Aaron chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Dude that was terrible, for both you're poor knowledge of the English language and from what i could read it didn't really have any depth to it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
To convey a message in English, you first have to master the language...no offence...I kinda got what you were trying to say but it would be better understood if the language was a bit clearer...and like I've peviously said, no offence. Appreciate the input none the less.
| mr nobody chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
who wrote this freaking 6 year old. multiple spelling mistakes and half of it didn't make sense
| Lol chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
| Grandma's blue eyed angel chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I don't like this!... But you can keep trying!
| jonnyfunboy chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Dude learn how to spell
| hell2day chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
LMFAO! This fic had me cracking up from the beginning. Definately do a sequel.
| Will chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Either you can't spell for shit OR you need to stay off the computer when you've been drinking !
| ArchadianRose chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Blatant troll fic.
| normdter chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
not to kill your writing spirit but you need more help and time to master the english language AND also have someone help proof read your material. The only way to get better is to write write write ( and PROOFREAD)