Reviews for Work Release |
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oldpotato chapter 14 . 10/19 The logic in this story makes no sense. "If I stay with my son, we'll get attacked hundreds of times every month, but if I leave my infant son alone to survive by himself with no help and no family, it's better because now he'll still be attacked, but just not as much?" What kind of backwards ass logic is this? In what world does Kushina leaving her infant son to fend for himself possibly help Naruto's chances to survive? If this becomes a forgiveness fic with forgiving Tsume as well then it's a utter waste of time. |
eepycommentor chapter 1 . 9/28 reminder for future me you alr seen this and dont like it dont reread |
kingsteeeeve123 chapter 13 . 8/23 You just had to find a way to put him with multiple girls didn’t you… you’re weird af I’m out |
Marco Zilvetti chapter 6 . 5/5 Yea, Hiruzen is definitely senile at this point. |
Marco Zilvetti chapter 4 . 5/5 So Hiruzen is a senile old man with altered perception of reality, he reminds me of Dumbledore of Harry Potter. |
elkenn chapter 13 . 3/17 God, i hope naruto doesnt fall for hiruzen's seduction plan for him... |
rashworth1984 chapter 31 . 1/17 I enjoyed this storyline, really hoping that you finish it. Love that you killed Sasuke 'off screen' |
Binge Reader chapter 1 . 10/28/2023 I sometimes wonder, how can you fuck up a Fanfic? You are only required to retell someone else's story with a twist to make it more interesting. Yet you fucked it up! |
dd780 chapter 16 . 10/23/2023 talk no jutsu at its finest |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2023 You literally said no body would know and then had the third tell everyone like then what was the point of writing that lie other then to waste everyone's time |
unknown chapter 3 . 8/13/2023 the kyuubi has a name and its kurama not kaen |
Guest chapter 31 . 6/6/2023 Is there more of this? I want to hear the world war. |
Guest chapter 31 . 5/12/2023 Next chapter please |
Guest chapter 31 . 5/9/2023 Next chapter please |
Guest chapter 31 . 5/8/2023 Next chapter please |