|Reviews for Beyond the Wheel|
| Jammin-2099 chapter 4 . 11/29/2010
So, after reading for a while, I have to say I like most of what you've written.
This story in particular though, I felt it needed to be mentioned. I think you have written Setsuna a bit too panicky about the situation in the first three chapters. Even in the Magical world she managed to function properly without coming to the extremes that you depict her in here. And in the magical world it was implied as being weeks, if not a month or more.
Can't say much on the quality of the Wheel of time side, since I don't read the series, but it seems fine so far.
I think you are writing Negi a bit ignorant as well. He IS a graduate of the magical-equivalent of at least highschool, if not college.
| Fanityfan chapter 4 . 11/28/2010
What an amusing chapter once more. I think Setsuna was somewhat out-of-character in the beginning, an unusual occurence in your stories.
I love your version of Eva. She's always very amusing. Asuna being the straight man also fits spot on.
Your crack stories are pretty much the best I've ever found, but you have a tendency to go too much over the top. I think you should keep the characters in check a little bit. When Wizards Meet is a good example. Your worst story from this perspective is the 2814 series, which - while very enjoyable and one I've read many times - is also somewhat incoherent.
In any case thanks for writing this. I really appreciate it.
| Ryuus2 chapter 4 . 11/28/2010
So Negi has effectively doubled his parties size and tripled the comedy potential.
And WTF is with Eva! That was the last thing I expected! A Paru golem definitely, Mana or Kaede possibly, but EVA? I definitely did not see that coming. Nor did I see it being so...graphic.
I wonder how Chisame's holding up in this technology-free dimension?
Keep up the great work!
| AvalanchCXVII chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
High Octane Nightmare Fuel right there...
Yay! New Chapter! Haruna is out there, Oh god, she probably took over the borderlands while the were all in the waste, unless she landed in the Blight, but even then...
If you get up to the Seanchan return proper, I can't wait for the fireworks.
| Bobboky chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
| Huilisti chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Okay, this sounds really promising~ :D
| Creticus chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
I must admit that although I'm indifferent to Negima and so disillusioned with the Wheel of Time as to be unable to muster interest even as the series approaches its conclusion, this is my personal favorite out of your stories.
It's strange because I've no idea why that this should be so except perhaps that the sheer contrast between the settings renders the crossover all the more entertaining. Regardless, you're doing fine work.
| Khagerou chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
Yeah you updated, awesome...
Well besides that this chapter had me loling a LOT
Here's hoping you can induce more crack into the two stories...
But the Eva thing was ehh...
I'm seriously wondering how Haruna will influence the world of The Wheel of Time...*I think I just felt all the multiverses shudder in fear*
You may also want to consider raising the Rating to T, though this is a just a newb talking..
If you are gonna skip section I suggest you don't skip Moirraine's "death" and change the future for the better in the Wheel of Time lie how Konoka could heal Rand's injuries since she has absolute healing or how Negi is like the ultimate strategist combatant..
Again waiting for your next update...
| dfshie chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
You really have come a long way since a few months ago. Everything you write now are so exaggerated, it doesn't seem all that funny anymore.
| WOT fanatic chapter 3 . 11/25/2010
Please continue this , I'm begging , you though kindly post it in the cross over section... it's really hard to track these things other wise. Anyway please update this is awesome...
| irfane chapter 3 . 11/4/2010
hilarious! A wheel of time crossover that makes sense! Impressive :)
| goku chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
hey I like this chapter but I really want to know what happens when they meet the wagons...how soon will konoka meet up with setsuna?
| goku chapter 3 . 9/15/2010
Cant wait for the next chapter.
| Ashar chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
I don't know where you took the inspiration for such a crossover, but the results are quite amusing. Seen the timeframe (just before the meeting of the DF caravan in the Waste), it could get to become quite interesting too, seen we're in the best WoT book's still. Cute the resident ninja appearance on a Sea Folk's ship and almost a given Kotaro becoming a wolfbrother. Hope you'll find time to continue this. :)
Do consider giving Setsuna her Konoka fix soon, she might become incontrollable, else. :D
| Firehedgehog chapter 3 . 7/16/2010