Reviews for The Guard
B4bidden.Products chapter 20 . 2/11
Pls pls pls pls update this has to be my most favourite story ever,
B4bidden.Products chapter 1 . 2/11
Omfg! ssssooooo good so far
waterdemon9 chapter 20 . 1/22
Great story! Love The twist on bella Can't wait till The next chapter comes out! On To The next story Of yours Lol
silversimon chapter 20 . 12/17/2014
Wish you would return to continue and complete your fun story. So ready to see Skyle's ass kicked and charred! Just finished rereading. This story and HBNB, which i especially admire, deserve not to be neglected :) Come back, please.
silentnight00 chapter 20 . 11/6/2014
This is an awesome story, in fact, all of your stories are awesome. Great work )
Kochabilka chapter 20 . 10/23/2014
Please update! I wanna know how they're going to kick the Romanian's asses!
Bumblebee transformer lover chapter 20 . 6/25/2014
Update please
Caliborn96 chapter 20 . 12/10/2013
Please update!
Caliborn96 chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
Nice twist
dolhpin33 chapter 20 . 10/23/2013
Can't wait to read more, please update again soon.
silversimon chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Maybe you could describe (via a discussio with Aro or another) the concept of vampire mating as you invision it... Marcus says she has 3 possible mates? Despite the contact "high "she feels with Demitri, as well as an intense connection. She feels nothing for Edward and only physical, sexual attraction towards Jasper. Furthermore no one has explained vampire mating to Bella, nor curiously enough had Bella asked for an explanation. You'd think she would ask so she'd know what to look for. I'm very confused about your version of vampire mating process. In addition she hasn't asked and no one has told her about Vampires 101, especially the "change".
silversimon chapter 9 . 10/13/2013
You previously had Edward tell Bella that Jasper was coming with the other 3 to visit. Where is he? If Edward is trying to dazzle her, I hope all the Volturi kick his ass! Maybe Aro can read him and discover his nefarious plans. But surely Demitri will seal the mating bond soon and Marcus will confirm that bond even quicker. Surely one of the Volturi will follow Bella to protect her from Edward. She also needs protection from Heidi. Why does Aro put up with her threats against a somewhere "vulnerable" member of the Volturi? Despite her powers and skills, she's not impervious against vamps, especially talented ones. Don't understand the Volturi's rather cavalier attitude towards her safety ...

Am enjoying your story a lot.
silversimon chapter 6 . 10/13/2013
Do NOT understand how Demitri doesn't recognized Bella is his mate? They both felt the "electricity" and absurd amounts of attraction...the connection. He expressed an interest in mating with the right kind of female in chapter 2... And why would he want her to mate with someone else in Volterra? Why would Aro object? Hope you clear up these inconsistencies pronto. Hope this is a sexy Demitri story.
Manasseh chapter 20 . 9/4/2013
Thanks for sharing, I hope you are able to finish it!
CiaoKawaiirina chapter 20 . 8/10/2013
WHY WOULD YA STOOOP?! Con fucking tinue!
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