|Reviews for The Will to Draw Onward|
| sudoheathen chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Excellent choice of manga. Genshiken is awesome!
Very nice poem, but it seems kinda generic. I understand that it's about Ogiue, but at the same time, it could be talking about anything. Be more creative! This IS Genshiken, after all.
Also, I like poems that are confusing. That means that emotions like "guilt", "pain", and "faith" should be shown as well as told.
But what do I know? I'm not a poet. But overall, it could be worse. Good job!