|Reviews for Paradise Thwarted|
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/21
This series is completely nuts... but brilliant! I'm not sure if you still get these messages as it was written 10 years but I really enjoyed both stories :)
| Snafflefang chapter 27 . 8/29/2019
What a great story, I love how it builds off of the original and your previous fanfic! I’m def going to read the next one next :)
| Claywind chapter 27 . 1/12/2018
That was amazing.
Truly, truly amazing.
Your writing is fluid and wonderful and your HUMOUR!
Dear, you made me laugh like an idiot in front of my computer. (I should never have brushed my teeth while reading this hilarious story)
The relationships and personnalities you've build are also fantastic. Aziraphale and Crowley are incredibly reliable and I love how you made the horsepersons interact with each other (not even counting the brilliance that is Michael/Lucifer/War being a dysfunctional family with Gabriel added to it). And Raphael is both adorable and kind of badass, and, and...
And everything to do with Uriel and Belial is pure GOLD.
So yeah. Great story.
You're a wonderful writer. Please keep doing what you're doing.
| Reader chapter 8 . 12/3/2017
You know the Fangirl Layer of Hell, is really kinda one of the best ideas ever. Both to serve as a torment of other people and as a place to damn certain fangirls of ships worth damning. Should make something of a humorous standalone ficlet about it, like people do with Mary Sue themes.
| Eme chapter 18 . 8/28/2017
Chapter 16 is my favorite! I really love your writing! Thank you so much for all the time and effort you've put in.
| Zantetsuken Reverse chapter 3 . 8/25/2017
This is my second time through your fanfictions, and I have to say that this is brilliant. It's hilarious and well researched. Last time I really wanted to know what was going to happen next, but now I enjoy reading everything. I love how Uriel is both adorable and terrifying, and even Samael just wanted to know what he was thinking. Also, weirdly enough, what drove me to finally review was the fact that your last footnote mentioned Amy Winehouse, on the same day that I learned her name.
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/1/2016
This is so funny(especially the last bit at the end) because while I know these are the Good Omens versions, while reading the names, my mind still says 'Supernatural'.
| JoftheMGirl chapter 17 . 4/16/2016
Okay, I'm re-reading this excellent story (and trust me, Manchester Lost was equally awesome), and I think it is possessing my radio. The same day I finished ML, Don't Stop Believing came on, and just yesterday I caught the tail end of Heaven is a Place on Earth. Just thought you might laugh that my minivan apparently thinks it's a Bentley.
| jejuneha chapter 8 . 11/1/2015
EEEEE!" cried a fangirl, "CROWLEY/GIGANTIC SNAKE OTP!"
"HOT SNAKE ON SNAKE ACTION!"
IM ON THE TRAIN AND WAS SHAKING WITH LAUGHTER AND I THINK I FREAKED OUT A FEW PEOPLE THIS STORY I SWEAR
| jejuneha chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
Oh man, that's a lot of shit happening in life in such a short period of time, I hope you're ok .-. ...
| GuesssWho chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
LOL Well that was just SO very helpful
| Linorien chapter 27 . 3/13/2014
I can't really put into words how much I enjoyed this. I can only say I wish it were a published book that I could have on my shelf next to Good Omens.
| Linorien chapter 11 . 3/10/2014
One of your most hilarious chapters thus far! All of the fun LOTR references! I really want to see what you would come up with if you sat down to pen a continuation of LOTR featuring the continued adventures of the fellowship when they meet up occasionally to visit Aragorn and sneak out at night to get up to who knows what kind of shenanigans,
| Linorien chapter 10 . 3/10/2014
Is that the exorcism from Supernatural I see? I mean I suppose it is somewhat standard but I wouldn't be surprised if you also watched spn and borrowed that as well. :)
| Madame Reveuse chapter 25 . 2/18/2014
"Lucifer, sir, would you like some tea?"
I've been waiting for this to happen ever since I started reading your GO-stories! And I mean literally ever since! I friggin love you (and Lucifer)! :D