Reviews for Paradise Thwarted
Kinoshita Kristanite chapter 15 . 4/24/2010
I do think it's time for the return of Happy Place-ing. Huzzah.

I should really be doing my homework instead of reading goodfic. Especially since it's 30 percent of my grade. You vile tempter. Encouraging sloth in the children. For shame.

My sister is really annoying me right this second, because I am ignoring her. I find it vaguely amusing to torment her so. See what you've made me do? I suppose you'll get a commendation for that. You might wish to duck.

And, I'm out of jokes. They've probably all been made before, but no matter.
Kira chapter 15 . 4/22/2010
Wow, that was one suspenseful chapter, can't wait to find out what's going on there.

And funny as always. If I would refer to everything, I'd have to post nearly the whole chapter. xD Great work again.

But poor, poor Belial, now I oficially pity him. *nod nod* xD
ylc chapter 15 . 4/21/2010
Oh dear... one of my favorite chapters so far! Very interesting and worrying... but still, very good!

Craic agus Ceol chapter 15 . 4/20/2010
How is it that you manage to make me panic and flail every single chapter? This is getting ridiculous!

Suddenly there is an image in my head of War cooing over a sword, wrapped in blankets a la a newborn baby. It's actually adorable!

Oh, poor Belial. Looks like Uriel is ill-equipped for what he's plotting. I'm suddenly reminded of that scene in Dogma where Alan Rickman rips off his pants and compares himself to a Ken doll XD XD

Please more updates! I don't think I can handle the cliffhangers D:
Myst chapter 15 . 4/19/2010
Jen. How can you leave us poor, poor people hanging like that? Loved it, as always, but now I'm going to spend a whole WEEK wondering what's going to happen to them. ;_;

Also, I'd pick out all the quotes that I found particularly awesome,but I think that would go over the character limit big time. I loved it, I did. 3
mirror2mirror chapter 15 . 4/19/2010
This chapter is a thing of pure beauty. But not for the angels, poor them. Except for Uriel. And to some extent, Belial. Yay, Belial finally got some action! Even if it was somewhat pathetic, he finally did get it. *squee*

Lucifer and Michael... *looks back to previous chapters* slashy twincest...? *coughcough* I wonder what Lucifer and Michael are going to be up to. If this is going to turn out anything like their battle in ML, probably it isn't going to be very good (not good as in a quality sense, because this hasn't declined in quality at all).

Poor Raphael and Zizi. This feels like it's going to hurt a lot. Okay, who am I kidding? It's going to be extremely, extremely, extremely painful and torturous. But it's okay, because they're going to be fine, right? Right?

Anyway, the usual, loved this chapter, and I can't wait for the next update. Thanks!
TMX Archives chapter 15 . 4/19/2010
""Don't worry Uriel, I'll be here to protect you," Belial said suavely.

"Who are you?"

"... ... ...""

*cracks up* Belial, do you truly realize what you've gotten yourself into?
Bookworm Gal chapter 15 . 4/19/2010
Yeesh, things are going downhill fast. And now it is time for the really long acronym. The creep better hurry because he is going to tick off one extremely stressed out ex-demon by going after Zizi. Can't wait for more.
Sivaroobini Lupin-Black chapter 15 . 4/19/2010


*reaches in and plucks out Gabriel, Michael, Uriel, Raphael, Belial and Azi - and Crowley too - and hides them away in her room*

Who was that guy in Lucifer's head? Surely not God. I can believe this, this betrayal, of the God from stuff like the Lucifer comics and Supernatural, but not the God you've shown us so far. The God you've written wouldn't do this to His most loyal servants.

And poor, poor Belial. In an otherwise tense section, that part was just... *sigh* *cuddles Belial* *pushes his hands back to appropriate positions* I was all SQUEE HE FINALLY GOT TO SNOG URIEL while just KNOWING Uriel would respond that way, but my heart still goes out to Uriel. Tell an adult he trusted! xD

Nitpicking: Raphael notices that there are demonic symbols in the leather straps. Azi also later notices that Azazel had taken the time to etch demonic sigils into the leather straps. ;)

... my hot chocolate turned into a congealed sludge. :(

Damnit, I can't believe how tense and scary this was. Even with Bel's failed seduction and the fact that RAPHAEL STARTED THE GREAT FIRE OMGWTFLOL. And Skalme!

... how am I going to stand waiting another week? D:
Kira chapter 14 . 4/16/2010
Great chapter, well, as always. The scenes with Gabe and Mika had me laughing constantly, trying not to, so that I wouldn't anger the neighbourhood xD

And also the "Do not hit"-button, I knew it would work just because it was designed to do nothing, after all it's Newt we're talking about.

Aw, Death gets lonely at the weekends.

Plagiarism, Hippies are monsters. lol

Not to forget the Michael-Fangirl xD

Oh hush, you snake.

That's Serpent.

Yes, yes. I love you.

He still wasn't very good at this part, but in private conversations he could at least say it quietly. I love you too.

Do I dare say it? Aww. XD
Craic agus Ceol chapter 14 . 4/15/2010
I feel like a traitor in saying that I'm totally rooting against humanity. Ah well, I feel like a lot of us are having that problem with this story.

Oh, so that's what happened to the Pulsifers! I figured they'd be showing up sooner or later. Doesn't seem like the sibling rivalry between Bentley and Aziraphale ever cooled off, either. XD

Ahahaha, jealous!Pollution cracks me up. He's so adorable! Though maybe that's because I love me some bishounens... Also the fact that War considers hippies to be monsters. And that the zombies call Pesti "Daddy."

Oh, Az. There totally is a such thing as a jiffy! But it's very vague as to what it actually describes.

(I kind of want to see War call Pollution "Little P" now. I bet he'd be FURIOUS)

Keep up the good work!
Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 14 . 4/13/2010
This...depraved, nuts and if it was a book, probably banned in some countries. It is also a work o art, absolute genius. Out of interest, is it because of the dearth of female characters that Newt/Anathema excepted (is it my imagination or were you hinting at Bentley/Azirapale 2? because the only other places I have seen that sort of ship is on the chronicles of Narnia and Harry Potter. Not criticism, just earnest curiosity) all your pairings are slash? Not bothered really, just slightl curious.
scrambled-eggs-at-midnight chapter 14 . 4/12/2010
Gabrial/Michael. OTP. Just saying.

Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one!

mirror2mirror chapter 14 . 4/12/2010
You're brilliant. This entire chapter had me laughing, giggling, snorting, and choking all at the same time (though how that is possible, I won't know, especially since I had an open bottle of water in my hand) but it's probably this part that had me laughing the most (And I haven't even watched the movie yet):

"This is unnatural! This is, this is monstrous! This! Is! PLAGIARISM!"

And Newt. Newt is sorta strange, but I guess that's how it's supposed to be. I do wonder what's happened to Anathema, though.

The zombie calling Pestilence 'Daddy' is extremely cute, for some reason.

Anyways, keep up the great work.

This! Is! GENIUS!
Bookworm Gal chapter 14 . 4/12/2010
Man, I don't know where to start on the awesomeness of this chapter. From Mike and Gabe to War and Big P, everything was fun. And Crowley has his Bentley back.
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