Reviews for Paradise Thwarted
Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
ylc chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
Hi dear!

Well, first of all, I must say I love your style of writting; I really think you're very good and the previous fic (as well as these chapters) was so hilarious!

Secondly, I can't believe you're writting this while going through a writer's block. Why? Well, because it's amazing! I mean it!

Anyway, hope you'll update soon 'cause I'm quite intrigued. Really want to see where this will end!

OceanTiger13 chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
...He called his in-laws.

Lol, love that part.

Sivaroobini Lupin-Black chapter 4 . 2/3/2010

Ironic indeed. xD Awesome as always, though I don't see why his first instinct wasn't to call Raphael. *shakes head*

Can't wait for the next chapter! 3
OceanTiger13 chapter 2 . 2/2/2010
I LOVED Manchester Lost, and hadn't really taken the time to review it, but OMG, THERE'S A SEQUEL! I have to review this. I love your writing! Makes me laugh out loud every time. : ) Keep writing!
I Brake For Bishounen Boys chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Oh, I'm so late in the game and I hadn't even realized you'd started this. This is amazing, and has made a horrible day infinitely better. I haven't laughed so hard in weeks.

Shinobi Mi-chan chapter 4 . 2/2/2010
Aw, poor Crowley! He can't even get in a demonic act every once in a while...oh, the irony.

But, oo, in-laws! I can't wait to see how this'll work out... :)
mirror2mirror chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
Aww, yipes. Poor Crowley. But I have to say: Yay, Inner Azi's back!

Let's see how Crowley hopes to get out of this one...
Craic agus Ceol chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
Oh NO, did Pesti just start the Zombocalypse? D: D: D: D:

I guess we all knew it would happen someday...

Crowley always was an absolutely rotten demon, wasn't he? His attempts at Falling are as amusing as they are heartbreaking, since his motives are adorable. Though that's probably what prevented his re-Fall in the first place :)

Keep up the good work! Yay for incoming Archangels! XD

(on a related note, my English class has been reading excerpts from Paradise Lost. I spent the entire lecture trying to figure out why it was MICHAEL [of all peop - erm, beings] that told Adam about all of the future Biblical heroes)
Bookworm Gal chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
There's some real irony here. When he tried his hardest in the last story to "do the right thing," he was getting commendations from Down There left and right. And now that he's trying to do the "wrong" thing, he's getting pats on the back. Crowley is doomed... doomed to be a failure at whatever he does.

Call the in-laws! That is an interesting idea. Wonder how well that will work...
palladium-46 chapter 4 . 2/1/2010

All the little details are what make this story fantabulous. The duck. The Inner Aziraphale. The attempted felling.

Thanks for this great chapter. :)
Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
Either michael or raphael will KILL him, unless god intervenes! How are we going to get out of this I wonder.
Evil Squid chapter 2 . 2/1/2010
Yes! Crowley is having more dreams! Dramatis Personae is very exciting, so many Teams. WOW!
Evil Squid chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Great recap! I think I'm still going to re-read Manchester Lost though... just for fun ;)
Shinobi Mi-chan chapter 3 . 2/1/2010
I'm all caught up now. :)

But, oo, this chapter was lovely. Certainly a well put-together start... a pleasure to read (I especially enjoyed between the archangels and archdemons!) But yes. Beautiful work!

(I own Lady GaGa's "The Fame" xD)
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