|Reviews for Paradise Thwarted|
| mirror2mirror chapter 3 . 1/31/2010
As promised, I've logged in and it's in my faves and subscriptions. Plus, it's bookmarked.
I feel kinda bad for reviewing this chapter twice, but this most definitely warrants it. Good luck with this!
| icequeen76 chapter 3 . 1/30/2010
YAY! it's up! its finally up! i've been waiting to what seemed like a decade and 5 more and finally its up!
and you have evidently done well in writing the story so far up to now, its really good. I love raphael's threat to crowley, the quick change in moods was hilarious! and adam, dead? no!why! ( sobs...)
in any case, I can't wait to read more!
| 2mirror chapter 3 . 1/29/2010
This is amazing! I can't log in right now because the site is being all weirdish, but I literally skipped with joy when I saw you had the sequel up. I love the archangels, especially Raphael and Crowley and the shotgun talk, and the meeting between the angels and the demons and I'm so definitely putting this on my bookmarks and favorites when I get the chance to log in. Keep up the great work!
| JuniXz chapter 3 . 1/29/2010
Ooh, only the first chapter and already increibly interesting. I like Belial and Uriel's short "pegicorn" conversation. XD
Love it, please keep going!
| Lost In A Dark Wood chapter 3 . 1/29/2010
You shot Aziraphale?
Please update soon.
| Yubi Shines chapter 3 . 1/28/2010
Oh dear, oh dear. Oh, Crowley, you silly boy.
DEAR URIEL, YOU DO NOT REALLY WANT A PEGACORN. YOU WANT A LLAMACORN. That's right, a horned llama. With wings. It would be great.
Getting off to a jolly good start!
| Sivaroobini Lupin-Black chapter 3 . 1/28/2010
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT AT A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT! YOU IDIOT, AZIRAPHALE! AND DON'T TELL ME CROWLEY IS GOING TO FALL! :S
That aside, I love your archangels, as ever xD and oh my, Belial... *swoons* And the Gospel according to Crowley! And poor Dagon!
UPDATE SON! I have a half-complete piece of smut, soon to be completed, for you... *dangles it like a carrot* So please, please, pretty please with chocolate sprinkles on top, UPDATE SON!
| Miyazaki A2 chapter 3 . 1/27/2010
*eyes twinkle* I can't tell you how happy I am to see this sequel! I'm so in love with it already! Your writing is absolutely hilarious, but somehow you also manage to work in the more serious elements (like, omg, Azzi getting SHOT) seamlessly, which I just adore. I have to tell you, I'm pretty sure I've read Manchester Lost at least four or five times, and it never gets old. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D 3
| Craic agus Ceol chapter 3 . 1/27/2010
I'm biting my lip out of fear for Aziraphale (and Crowley, by proxy - and because I have the feeling that he's going to go do something unpleasant). There's so much suspense, it's quite wonderful! I'm so glad you posted this story! :D
Keep up the good work!
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 2 . 1/27/2010
hang on, a question. How can Adam be dead? its like Jesus! Or wait...Is he making a reappearance.
| EllyFoxxfire chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
Still not letting me logon BUT regardless, I just want to say I am proud of you! *glomp glomp* This is lovely, although por Aziraphael. You know I love your writing! 3 Just lovely lovely lovely! 3 3
| Pixagi chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
-takes a deep breath- SQUEE~!
I'm so happy to see this! And it's wonderful, just as good (if not better) than it's predecessor. The way you write Uriel makes me giggle with glee3
I can't wait to read the rest of this.
| Nolongeractivebyebye chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
Do you know how much I love you for writing this?
Really, I loved Manchester Lost and the sequel makes me the happiest fangirl on Earth xD
Hope you to upload soon; I can’t wait for reading more!
PD: Sorry for the spelling mistakes etc.
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
I think that:
A)Crowley is going to smite the woman (pepper?)
B)He is going to transform back into a demon
C) all of creation is fucked.
| Silverfox1 chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
Yay, snake!Crowley! And Belial! A perfect start. ;)