|Reviews for What If|
| slightlyrealness12 chapter 1 . 4/30
It's not bad writing or a bad idea for a story even. My issue is all the drama. I feel like this love gets lost in all the crap of Edward trying to catch up. Not a bad story although not really my thing. You are a good writer and should continue (:
| lmc123 chapter 30 . 2/26
Oh no... its coming to an end... poor blake
| lmc123 chapter 28 . 2/25
See... some things are worth waiting for..
Makes me think of the beautiful movie hope floats...So when you find yourself at the beginning, just give hope a chance to float up... and it will...
| lmc123 chapter 27 . 2/25
Nice lyric to end on. Edward was right, old bella was wanting g her cake and to eat it too...
| lmc123 chapter 26 . 2/25
| lmc123 chapter 23 . 2/25
This is where I started to think... not blake... don't be blake... please don't be blake...
| lmc123 chapter 22 . 2/25
Im glad he told her, the stuff he told her was perfect..
| lmc123 chapter 21 . 2/25
Whoa, that was extreme but kinda fitting reaction bless him..
| lmc123 chapter 20 . 2/25
I am off to listen to the song. I kinda feel relieved it happened and he has gone back and so glad he got to ask her before he went
| lmc123 chapter 1 . 2/24
dont know why I was not logged in for the last few reviews... I am reading for the second time and trying to review much more than I did when I first read. This story is wonderful and deserves so any more reviews. Come on people... you are getting to read an amazing book for free... leave a little love...
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/24
Still dreading the end of every chapter. Starting to feel like edward bless him, the whole time there is a little bit of dread soon it will all be gone... and i have already read this story before!
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/24
Harsh...that was a rough chapter, jeez i felt for him..
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/24
Every chapter now I end thinking shit will he wake up back in L A
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/24
Its so funny that its so odd that bella has blue eyes... your right its just eye colour but it seems so strange... us twilighters are very stuck on somethings-
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/24