Reviews for What If
lmc123 chapter 27 . 2/25/2015
Nice lyric to end on. Edward was right, old bella was wanting g her cake and to eat it too...
lmc123 chapter 26 . 2/25/2015
Killer!
lmc123 chapter 23 . 2/25/2015
This is where I started to think... not blake... don't be blake... please don't be blake...
lmc123 chapter 22 . 2/25/2015
Im glad he told her, the stuff he told her was perfect..
lmc123 chapter 21 . 2/25/2015
Whoa, that was extreme but kinda fitting reaction bless him..
lmc123 chapter 20 . 2/25/2015
I am off to listen to the song. I kinda feel relieved it happened and he has gone back and so glad he got to ask her before he went
lmc123 chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
dont know why I was not logged in for the last few reviews... I am reading for the second time and trying to review much more than I did when I first read. This story is wonderful and deserves so any more reviews. Come on people... you are getting to read an amazing book for free... leave a little love...
Guest chapter 19 . 2/24/2015
Still dreading the end of every chapter. Starting to feel like edward bless him, the whole time there is a little bit of dread soon it will all be gone... and i have already read this story before!
Guest chapter 17 . 2/24/2015
Harsh...that was a rough chapter, jeez i felt for him..
Guest chapter 15 . 2/24/2015
Every chapter now I end thinking shit will he wake up back in L A
Guest chapter 14 . 2/24/2015
Its so funny that its so odd that bella has blue eyes... your right its just eye colour but it seems so strange... us twilighters are very stuck on somethings-
Guest chapter 12 . 2/24/2015
Noooooo!
Guest chapter 11 . 2/24/2015
Ahhh, bless him... this story is so well written. Its... is beautiful
Guest chapter 9 . 2/24/2015
Did I tell you I love this story? I LOVE THIS STORY!
lmc123 chapter 6 . 2/23/2015
Way more people should have reviewed, this story is so good...
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