Reviews for What If
Guest chapter 2 . 8/20/2015
This is what would have happened if he went to UW
googoocar1 chapter 28 . 8/2/2015
Just discovered this story and I've been binge reading. It's so good! Nice homage to 'The Notebook' in this chapter! ;)
shorty1773 chapter 31 . 7/31/2015
I just loved this story! It was so original! Would love to read an epi one day...Thanks for sharing your talent with us! :)
ellekat08 chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
I'm gonna give it a try although it's a little weird a Bella with blue eyes
slightlyrealness12 chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
It's not bad writing or a bad idea for a story even. My issue is all the drama. I feel like this love gets lost in all the crap of Edward trying to catch up. Not a bad story although not really my thing. You are a good writer and should continue (:
lmc123 chapter 30 . 2/26/2015
Oh no... its coming to an end... poor blake
lmc123 chapter 28 . 2/25/2015
See... some things are worth waiting for..

Makes me think of the beautiful movie hope floats...So when you find yourself at the beginning, just give hope a chance to float up... and it will...
lmc123 chapter 27 . 2/25/2015
Nice lyric to end on. Edward was right, old bella was wanting g her cake and to eat it too...
lmc123 chapter 26 . 2/25/2015
lmc123 chapter 23 . 2/25/2015
This is where I started to think... not blake... don't be blake... please don't be blake...
lmc123 chapter 22 . 2/25/2015
Im glad he told her, the stuff he told her was perfect..
lmc123 chapter 21 . 2/25/2015
Whoa, that was extreme but kinda fitting reaction bless him..
lmc123 chapter 20 . 2/25/2015
I am off to listen to the song. I kinda feel relieved it happened and he has gone back and so glad he got to ask her before he went
lmc123 chapter 1 . 2/24/2015
dont know why I was not logged in for the last few reviews... I am reading for the second time and trying to review much more than I did when I first read. This story is wonderful and deserves so any more reviews. Come on people... you are getting to read an amazing book for free... leave a little love...
Guest chapter 19 . 2/24/2015
Still dreading the end of every chapter. Starting to feel like edward bless him, the whole time there is a little bit of dread soon it will all be gone... and i have already read this story before!
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