Reviews for What If
Guest chapter 14 . 2/24
Its so funny that its so odd that bella has blue eyes... your right its just eye colour but it seems so strange... us twilighters are very stuck on somethings-
Guest chapter 12 . 2/24
Guest chapter 11 . 2/24
Ahhh, bless him... this story is so well written. Its... is beautiful
Guest chapter 9 . 2/24
Did I tell you I love this story? I LOVE THIS STORY!
lmc123 chapter 6 . 2/23
Way more people should have reviewed, this story is so good...
lmc123 chapter 5 . 2/23
Reading for bg the second time... I love this story...
Luereetwilitejunki chapter 2 . 2/16
lollol I loved the boxers he had on it made me laugh out loud! lol
Remmykins1901 chapter 31 . 1/27
This plagued me for days, I couldn't think of anything else or even feint interest in any other story or book. I loved this story with a sickness, I read it all on my phone, which I actually threw (thank god for carpets) I don't have very many stories or books that have a genuine place in my heart, This is now one of those stories.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
twlightbella chapter 31 . 12/26/2014
Aww sweet
twlightbella chapter 30 . 12/26/2014
LightThroughTheDarkness chapter 31 . 11/28/2014
I just have to tell you that I absolutely love this story. Usually with fanfics that are so long, there's a period where it just drags a bit and loses sight of the plot, but this one is a thrilling ride from start to finish. While the anticipation kills me sometimes, I love how you bring this Edward to the brink of happiness then tear it away! This is definitely one of my new favorite stories, and I look forward to reading anything else you decide to write! Thank you for creating such a wonderful story!
My Friend Alice chapter 31 . 11/7/2014
I have so enjoyed this love story!
Cullen Mascot chapter 4 . 10/21/2014
What a trippy story line! Liking it so far.
marsmallow10 chapter 31 . 10/4/2014
Thank you !
hairline chapter 31 . 9/28/2014
Wow this is brilliant thank you
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