|Reviews for What If|
| Novel's addict chapter 27 . 11/24/2013
i'm loving you a little now
| Novel's addict chapter 24 . 11/24/2013
i cried soooo much i really hate you
| Novel's addict chapter 22 . 11/24/2013
i cried A LOT in the past two chapters and i really hate you :,(
| Novel's addict chapter 20 . 11/24/2013
i hate youuuu NOOOO this can't happen you're EVIL , EVIL i tell yea
| a-mess chapter 25 . 11/17/2013
| a-mess chapter 22 . 11/17/2013
A BOYFRIEND? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I CRIED THE MINUTE HE WOKE UP ALONE AND NOW SHE HAS A BOYFRIEND I AM A RIVER OF TEARS RIGHT ITS ALL TOO MUCH
| perpetually chapter 31 . 9/22/2013
| perpetually chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
Omg this story is brilliant! Just for the record, I love stories that have a bit of time travel and misplacement in it, like people waking up in another alternate universe and learning a valuable lesson and then ending up having to use it in their own reality, I personally think it's such a nice way to teach people life lessons and just really let them live an alternate reality and make them see all the things they've taken granted for before. Can't wait to keep on reading!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
SO SWEET! DAMN
| xDarkFairy chapter 31 . 9/18/2013
LOVED this Story, Really Amazing 3
| Nikki1219 chapter 29 . 9/13/2013
So I never wear perfume and I mean NEVER and I actually may pick this up and try it, I just checked Amazon and even the reviews on there were raving over the cotton candy smell!
| Nikki1219 chapter 28 . 9/13/2013
WOW...Well, yeah , so there's that juicy chapter! Also, this may be my favorite Edward and Alice friendship...EVER!
| Nikki1219 chapter 26 . 9/13/2013
This is such a fantastic story...even at its lowest point. Just beautifully written!
| lmc123 chapter 31 . 9/11/2013
I have loved this story!
Family man one of my fave movies, and love how you adapted that, I always felt cheated at the end when he gets her at the airport and you only get 5 min and the movie finishes. I loved that I got a whole half of story after his glimpse to see how he pulls it off. Has this story been rec'd on the lemonade stand? If not I want to rec it, thought it was so good. I read all morning, had to go out for 3 hours and thought about the story tthe whole time, desperate to get back to see what was happening. Thanks for the sstory x Lisa-Marie
| lmc123 chapter 24 . 9/11/2013
From the last chapter I was chanting don't be blake, don't be blake, and I just knew it was gonna be... poor edward, I think he's gonna cry, you were mean...