|Reviews for Return of the Gamesmaster|
| joanna robinson chapter 12 . 11/21
First of all,i've been waiting for a long time for a sequel to the that being said,it was good.I have a anyone come up with a story explaining how did cobra conquer the world in a alternate universe from the episode called worlds without end?i have been trying to figure that one out for years.
| cheryl.leggans chapter 12 . 10/23/2014
| cheryl.leggans chapter 6 . 10/22/2014
I did not find these stories until this year and I'm enjoying this one. Sorry you didn't get many review s.
| bugsymutt chapter 12 . 8/24/2013
I realize you wrote this several years ago, but I just found it and I thought it was a fun story. I re-watched this cartoon episode not long ago and your story was a nice follow up. I always like happy endings!
| Avalon.Roxy chapter 10 . 10/13/2011
Aw man! I hate cliffhangers! More please.
| Shades-Soul chapter 10 . 9/3/2011
o.o THEY CANNOT DIE! D: But still funny how Serp. got knocked into a tree...ANYWAY can't wait for more
| Shades-Soul chapter 9 . 7/1/2011
Nice . I can't wait to see what happens next. I know this was a chapter or two ago, but I hope Snake Eyes kicks some Serpentor ass for hitting on Scarlett xD
| Blueblade18 chapter 6 . 4/24/2011
Hey i just wanted to say i saw your message on how u were saying there is very little feedback and i wanted to say i love this story... plz keep writing more G.I. Joe stories... in fact i might right one myself... and i maybe u can help me with that story? Anyway keep writing stories! Bc i will read them! Ooh and maybe u should make Zaranna have a crush on Serpentor bc i would like to see how he would react to that... lol
| Isis4 chapter 9 . 11/13/2010
Mainframe! He is so smart!
Keep up the updates!
| Isis chapter 8 . 6/19/2010
An update! Good! I think our dear Joes and Cobras will survive! I see Serpentor got interested in Scarlett...hmm... I don't think Scarlett will fall for him!
| Isis4 chapter 7 . 4/26/2010
An update! Great! Zarana did something important this time, I like that! Should be interesting if they encounter the dragons one more time later!
| willwrite4fics chapter 6 . 3/28/2010
This story reads much like the cartoon(the original cartoon). I could just about picture it on screen in fact.
| Isis4 chapter 6 . 3/28/2010
I think you should check this out because Duke is in the island:
"Zartan, calm down," Duke told him sternly. The last thing they needed right now was for people to start panicking and snapping at each other.
"No, he's right, Duke," Cover Girl spoke up. "Every minute that goes by is another minute that their lives are in danger. We can't afford to just sit around!" Snake-Eyes nodded vigorously in agreement.
As I expected, it's hard for the Joes and Cobras to get along well!
And please, let Zarana the opportunity to show the Joes that she actually has a brain!;)
I can't picture Zarana falling in love for Serpentor (sorry!). But it's your story, so do what you want!
With all respect, I think you should write when you want to and what you want to, despise reviews.
Thanks for the update.
| RedLovesSnakes chapter 5 . 3/18/2010
All this time I was off of FanFic I must let you know I was anticipating going back on to read your story. Lucky me you have updated well! Love it! Love all of your interpretations of the Cobras, so real to me!
| Isis4 chapter 5 . 3/2/2010
I'm glad that you are updating!
Now that the Joes and Cobras will join forces, I wonder how they will get together to find the missing comrades.
I wonder what will happen on the next "stage" of the game. Keep it up!