Reviews for Naruto and The Water Princess
Guest chapter 6 . 12/15/2015
I take it you like Final Fantasy video games Gilgamesht is a reference to Final Fantasy 12 in Final Fantasy 13 the mystic swordsman not a bad idea
TkAnime chapter 43 . 12/1/2015
im done reding it. First of all this story has a good plot. But the way u put the things makes it sort of like crap. For example Sakura turns out to be a burden to Naruto's actions which started to turn me. And u put in a lot of crossover characters which was the worst thing.
ajm35 chapter 15 . 3/23/2015
This story has turned to absolute crap...little to no character interacting between characters and your relationship development is practically non existent the only thing you had going for you were the fight scenes... And those were starting to put me to sleep... Started out strong but alas I can not continue as it has become way to disappointing
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
OMG I AM LOVING THIS FIC GREAT JOB 100000000/10 HANDS DOWN I'm trying to start up writing fanfics so i was kinda wondering if chance you would like to beta for me or do a colab story pm please i will bow down to you as your apprentice lol you are amazing at writing read your other stories and by far you are one of the best writters on this site thanks for listening too my little rant there bye
Marz-ReDD chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
me again just reviewed asking to colab dk if my user name was attached lol but that was me
cody chapter 43 . 4/24/2014
Loved it but eh cause not one cross overs but was good
oppaihammer chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
Wow this fix I really really bad!
My advise to everyone don't bother reading it
Googlemo chapter 12 . 8/12/2013
Well, thats really bad FF. Won't bother to read anymore, and my advise to all: do the same.
Googlemo chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
"The power to believe in yourself can change destiny" - LOLWHAT?! So just by believing in yourself you can stop war, kill millions of enemies and rape all women?! Oh, yeah, its just bullshit from fanfic...
Googlemo chapter 8 . 8/12/2013
Yeah, right. Hot girl like Mei is in love with a naive child... I see, you don't even try to make this harem at least a little trustworthy.

Also why Naruto sucked so hard against Kiba with such strong new abilities?! Thats just nonsense!
Googlemo chapter 7 . 8/12/2013
too many new powers for my taste... Naruto have super sword, new bloodline, and sasuke now has sword too... I mean in original story power balance was pretty good. I don't see any point in making Naruto much stronger, its simply overpowering him.
I mean remember, Naruto was almost ALWAYS weaker than his opponent in canon but he won due to his tenacity and will power(and Kyuubi), not skill and strength(the only one he was actually stronger was Kiba).
Googlemo chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
Ok, "Kikon Process of my family" groping breasts?! Seriously? Man, thats funny, but so stupid...
Why the hell would you include the bitch sakura in to a Naruto harm that is almost as fucked up a the fucking god dam Yaoi! What the Hell where you thinking you automatically ruin a story by making the dam banshee part of any harm!
lightskiller chapter 36 . 11/26/2012
im sorry but im going to stop reading this story. first of all it's gotten alittle farfetch with the alternate dimention thing. it's just not needed. dont get me wrong the plot is good. they story is funny to and thats a good thing. as i said up above the alternate dimention part just put me off
Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2012
Suna, not Kaze in the Omake
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