|Reviews for Naruto and The Water Princess|
| ajm35 chapter 15 . 3/23
This story has turned to absolute crap...little to no character development...no interacting between characters and your relationship development is practically non existent the only thing you had going for you were the fight scenes... And those were starting to put me to sleep... Started out strong but alas I can not continue as it has become way to disappointing
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
OMG I AM LOVING THIS FIC GREAT JOB 100000000/10 HANDS DOWN I'm trying to start up writing fanfics so i was kinda wondering if chance you would like to beta for me or do a colab story pm please i will bow down to you as your apprentice lol you are amazing at writing read your other stories and by far you are one of the best writters on this site thanks for listening too my little rant there bye
| Iz'una-Uchiha90 chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
me again just reviewed asking to colab dk if my user name was attached lol but that was me
| cody chapter 43 . 4/24/2014
Loved it but eh cause not one cross overs but was good
| oppaihammer chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
Wow this fix I really really bad!
My advise to everyone don't bother reading it
| Googlemo chapter 12 . 8/12/2013
Well, thats really bad FF. Won't bother to read anymore, and my advise to all: do the same.
| Googlemo chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
"The power to believe in yourself can change destiny" - LOLWHAT?! So just by believing in yourself you can stop war, kill millions of enemies and rape all women?! Oh, yeah, its just bullshit from fanfic...
| Googlemo chapter 8 . 8/12/2013
Yeah, right. Hot girl like Mei is in love with a naive child... I see, you don't even try to make this harem at least a little trustworthy.
Also why Naruto sucked so hard against Kiba with such strong new abilities?! Thats just nonsense!
| Googlemo chapter 7 . 8/12/2013
too many new powers for my taste... Naruto have super sword, new bloodline, and sasuke now has sword too... I mean in original story power balance was pretty good. I don't see any point in making Naruto much stronger, its simply overpowering him.
I mean remember, Naruto was almost ALWAYS weaker than his opponent in canon but he won due to his tenacity and will power(and Kyuubi), not skill and strength(the only one he was actually stronger was Kiba).
| Googlemo chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
Ok, "Kikon Process of my family" groping breasts?! Seriously? Man, thats funny, but so stupid...
| UNSC DESTROYER EDESHIMARROW chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Why the hell would you include the bitch sakura in to a Naruto harm that is almost as fucked up a the fucking god dam Yaoi! What the Hell where you thinking you automatically ruin a story by making the dam banshee part of any harm!
| lightskiller chapter 36 . 11/26/2012
im sorry but im going to stop reading this story. first of all it's gotten alittle farfetch with the alternate dimention thing. it's just not needed. dont get me wrong the plot is good. they story is funny to and thats a good thing. as i said up above the alternate dimention part just put me off
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2012
Suna, not Kaze in the Omake
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/15/2012
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
WAIT HE'S A DRAGON SLAYER PLS?!