|Reviews for Entwined|
| Rufael chapter 13 . 6/6/2017
Nice ending. And...for her to say that she would have loved him...that was special :)
| Rufael chapter 12 . 6/6/2017
Death? Saturn? Nice :). Still didn't understand what was that about a second Silver Crystal. Don't remember that part being in the anime. Either one of them.
| Rufael chapter 11 . 6/6/2017
Nice chapter. Very touching at the end. So they save him. I really hope they do. All that trouble just for him to die... I remember the anime a bit. He did not make it. He never called the Senshi for help. He went alone. By the time they reached him, they were too late. I like your version better :).
| Rufael chapter 9 . 6/6/2017
Ok I stand corrected. I thought you changed the script and made Usagi become Black Lady. Pity, somehow I would have enjoyed the roles to be reversed there. But I guess... she just cannot be corrupted. If she can be... all else falls. Don't remember though, was Esmeraude saved in the end or not? My memory says no. Hmm. I did like the fact that those 4 Black Moon sisters were saved. I do remember one of them dying though. The original version was so much better. And to answer your message, I never read the manga so i didn't know that Crystal was so close to it. I think it was a good thing the anime stays true to the manga. Lots of animus screw up because they detach themselves from the original script. Not in this case it seems. The original anime, as it was in terms of graphics, deserves to be praised.
| Rufael chapter 8 . 6/6/2017
I actually thought they would fail. But who attacked Diamond? And an exhausted Usagi...that was cute. 'A very bad bug' :))
| Rufael chapter 7 . 6/6/2017
First off, I really think Mamoru is an idiot. Wanted to say this for quite a while. If he wanted to 'save' Usagi by pushing her away... what would become of Chibiusa? She would not exist obviously. He didn't think it through. Not to mention he nearly killed Usagi in the process. Second... I thought those dreams were sent by Endymion, not Diamond. But honestly I like your theory more. He would be the only one to gain smth out of it. I never understood why Endymion would send a vision like that to his past self when he knew the implications. Didn't make any sense. Third, Demand instead of Diamond? What the actuall F? It made sense for Saphir to have a Diamond... similarity in names and all that I mean. But Demand? Crystal really messed up here. Sooo... I take it in this fic, Usagi becomes the Black Lady. Interesting. I would have liked to see that in a fan art or smth.
| Rufael chapter 6 . 6/5/2017
I must rewatched the show. I don't remember it being so... Detailed. It's as if this story is a combination of Sailor Moon and Crystal. With your personal touch to it, of course :)
| Jakeros chapter 13 . 5/9/2016
So this is the end? No author's note?
Gotta say, I'm surprised. I remember very little of the time travel arc of the series but this was a nice rewrite.
You saved basically everyone, except rubeus (but he was kind of an arse anyways). Impressive.
3 down, 3 to go. On to Heartbound!
| Jakeros chapter 11 . 5/9/2016
OK, this has to be my favorite chapter of the story.
It's just so damn sweet!
You saved saphir for petz, and got minako to soothe kunzite - how could I hate this chapter? Impossible, I say!
| Jakeros chapter 9 . 5/9/2016
I know for a fact that when the senshi fought the dragon, tuxedo kamen killed it and by extension esmeraude herself in the actual manga.
Nice twist, but can sailor moon fix this lover's debacle? We shall see.
| Jakeros chapter 7 . 5/9/2016
Hm. Somehow I like your Diamond way better than the others I've read - maybe because yours isn't a psychopathic asshole.
Well, from the looks of it anyway.
| Jakeros chapter 2 . 5/9/2016
What? Oh HELL NO!
Chiba, get your head out of your arse right now! You're way of "protecting" usa-chan is only going to kill her - literally!
Wait till the senshi hear of this. There won't be much left of chiba when they get a hold of him.
| HyenaYu chapter 13 . 12/5/2015
*whistle I'm done and this was good.
| HyenaYu chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
This is so heartbreaking, this chapter...
| HyenaYu chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Oooooooh I like this one