Reviews for With You Went the Biggest Piece of Me
Catmint chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
This is a brilliant starter chapter. Will you ever be updating it?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
This is awesome! More please!
arm chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
R u gonna rite more
Sallz chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
please please please continue, this is absolutely brilliant. Looking forward to more.
rubiesandrain chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
OMG! I love this so far! UPDATE SOON! :)
moonfaerie326 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010

I am speechless, I absolutely cannot wait to read more of this. I am looking forward to wherever you take it. Guh. You have a really good plot coming here, I can tell already. :3

Cardboard Tony is ecstatic, as well as Cardboard Tina.


Kudos to you, I really can't wait to see what the next chapter will have in store for us!
Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Interesting beginnings, I look forward to seeing where it goes!
pia chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
poor abby. poor ziva, i hope she doesn't get into trouble, marching off like that, she is a hot-head at times.
sydney chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
i like the new take on this kind of story so please i beg of you to keep going with this story
Ziva fan chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Can't wait to see where you take this. Love no nonsense Ziva getting the job done.
meb chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Great beginning. Sets up a really interesting plot. Hope you will update soon.
null12 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is really good!

Hope you update soon!
bdwjnsqajhrfiue chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
i love it just after this the last like something ziva would do.

cant wait for another update. :D
them09 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Please Update Soon.

I liked it you really captured the essence of the relationship between Ziva and her father.