|Reviews for Origin of the Luminous One|
| MizJoely chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
Certainly a different take on the G-Force/Gatchaman dilemma than any I've ever seen! Nice job.
| transmutejun chapter 5 . 1/27/2010
You've done a great job on this! You really took a small comment and elaborated it, creating an interesting and believable bridge between two series we know and love.