Reviews for Retail Therapy Outtakes
Timmer chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
"Tell me if you’d like to see more of Darcyward".

Duh... as if we would say no...LOL!

OF COURSE! Thanks for EPOV ! Lovely to see his reaction to meeting Bella.

I think that little poet Brooke said it all in her review...nice one B !
GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Loved this outtake! Miss you Cosmo. Look forward to the next chapter! ;)
Cullen's ATL Girl chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Cosmogirl...this is hot...I liked the outtake...I could get used to it ;-)
campcathryn chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Love it
Meadowgirl552 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Always love Edward's side of their story because he has a more fascinating take on things most times. Cannot wait to see what happens in the outtake from when they first go out and when she is attacked
lovinjim chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Thank you! RT is one of my favs so this was a real treat!
flyrbrd chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Thank you for the outtake. They are one of the best things about fan fiction. More please!
Adamanta Banks chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Cosmo, it was nice to see this scene from Edward's point of view. I think everyone is looking for perfection. The type of perfection that is perfect for them.

I think you might know you have found it when even the imperfections are perfectly acceptable.

Sigh.

I've been overly sentimental lately.

Love Sunshine.
maizeandblueinvalpo chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
It's always nice to get another point of view.
anais mark chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
*sigh*

Of course, we want more of Darcyward. You don't even have to ask.

Lovely outtake, I wish he'd spilled something about his obscure past...oh, well.

Next time?

I'm willing to do thing, you know...wink.
squarepancake chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Love it! I like how he picks up on nuances while trying to understand her- and I'm glad he didn't do anything too stalkerish like write down her license plate number.
ScarletBlondepr chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
oh, bb, I definitely want to see more of Darcyward!

I always thought he felt that strong of a connection.

Psst - I didn't get to participate in SR's interview either. :(
Navarre chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Cosmo, that outtake was sensual and beautiful.

There is no other couple that encompasses beauty, unity, sensuality and electric connection than Edward & Bella.

They represent pure raw love. *sigh*

You capture their essence beautifully!
raina31 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Love at first sight? Loved it. I love your keen sense of writing.
PBJilly chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Besotted he is! I thought when I was reading that there was no way a man could notice that much about a woman's clothing but then I reminded myself: besotted, totally besotted. And when you posted the teaser on the thread I immediately jumped on the line "how much money I had"-do we know yet HOW much money he has? Thanks Cosmo, and yes, I would love some more EPOV!
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