Reviews for Void
Ganheim chapter 3 . 4/1/2010
nothing but my thoughts – nothing material and no data.

[Repetition of “nothing”, though given the number of “nonoun” in the surrounding sentences I’m not sure what to suggest as an alternative]

Chapter 2

She had been a classmate – even if I had never talked to her

[But she did talk to her – she just never got a response from Haruhi]

Unexpected, but it has a strange sense of seeming to fit, too. I just would’ve liked to see some more (clear) introspection.
superstarultra chapter 3 . 1/28/2010
I really like this. Then again, I always did like anything with Ryoko in it. Keep on going with this.
superstarultra chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
I never really thought about that connection between Haruhi and Ryoko. Insightful.
Broken Kilter Express chapter 2 . 1/28/2010
OK, you alleviated my worries with this one, Its really something else you have here, an exceptional idea I'd say.
Broken Kilter Express chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I am intrigued, but I think this is a gamble to do a fic of this sort, and i wonder if you'll find yourself low on original ideas. I do wish that you continue.