|Reviews for Pretending|
| Rebeccaseal chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
So cruel, that she'll never know. I always thought the cruelest kisses were the ones when one was asleep.
| Angelus Erreare chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Painfully realistic. I'd say that I agree with you on this...It explains the end. Haha, good piece. I enjoyed it.
| IrisWill chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I would just like to say...THANK YOU:
-for not forcing a happily-ever-after AkiyamaxNao ending
-for not turning Akiyama into a cheesy knight-in-shining-armor type character
-for allowing the characters to stay in their beloved in-character personalities (okay...maybe there was a little tweak where Akiyama was involved, but the story was good, so who cares? D )
-and lastly (my current biggest pet peeve) for not making Akiyama into a pervert, sadist, or pervert/sadist-in-denial
A sweet story all around, if a bit simple. 6.75/10
| sayume214 chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Aww, that was so cute!
This was a lot better than I expected, and I love this type of surprises.
Thank you for writing this. I'd be glad to read more AkiNao shots from you, if you ever feel like writing more.
| Apple Yumi 94 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
cuteness! 8/10 stars!
| Lansky chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Cliffy ending ahah,
good one shot, though i wish
there was like a 2nd part to this,
though i am just being bias cause i like happy ending
| Heise chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Aw :( Depressing... but quite logical.
| Uchiha.Sophitia chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
This is an amazing piece and just made me cry.
| Dagas Isa chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
There's a lot of substance here, and I think you did a good job of keeping Akiyama in character, which can be difficult when trying to find the balance between what is his obvious care for Nao, and his natural stoicism.
I also really like the way you handled the 'stalkery' aspect of the story. On one hand spinning a believable justification for why he would be there, and on the other hand letting him feel just a little creepy for his actions. And that actually makes what happens seem sweet and caring rather than stalkery.
It's a short story, but very satisfying. Hope you choose to write more for this fandom.