|Reviews for Beginnings|
| Tirielle chapter 12 . 2/18
That was shamelessly, shamelessly heartwarming. I approve.
| oofuri111 chapter 4 . 1/5
I wasn't liking the oc doctor but once I read it was sakura that sounded better. I like that you remembered sai usually everyone forgets about him.
| oofuri111 chapter 2 . 1/4
Is so sad when sasuke had to kill his family but like always naruto somehow helps him back to reality.
| oofuri111 chapter 1 . 1/3
Is the cutestsssssssss naruto story I have ever read. Thank you for sharing that mind of yours :-)
| Elise chapter 12 . 10/30/2013
Amazing story! :) Made me smile.
| luvthesea17 chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
HOLY SHIT THIS IS HILARIOUS
XD SO GLAD U CONTINUED
| luvthesea17 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
OMIGOSH THIS IS ADORABLE AND PERFECTTTT
and not disgustingly fluffy like some stories. Just the right amount of fluff :D
Onto chapter 2!
Your annoying fan,
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 12 . 7/22/2013
I like this - it's sweet and funny and sounds like something my little brother might've said when he was small.
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/14/2013
Fantastic story! I love family-oriented-ness of this story. You capture the bonds very well, especially from Naruto's pov
| paracuties chapter 12 . 7/14/2013
Awwww, that's just so cute. I'm assuming you're not going to add anything anymore...but every single chapter I laughed practically every other word. And I'm glad you finished it. Still, kind of disappointed Senji didn't turn out to be the actual Itachi, but instead Sasuke...seems kind of weird for him to have gone back in time and thought out stuff and everything. But still AMAZINGLY written; I loved it. It was really cute, seeing it from a kid's point of view (you did that so well, by the way, it seems like you know how kids think and everything, unless you're writing it on how everybody thinks how kids think), and just so much more bittersweet because all his surroundings are messed up and relationships really quite messed up-URGH I loved it, but it was really sad too. Well, no, I was laughing too much for it to be sad. But still.
So, I'm going to end this review, since I'm kind of going on and on about nonsense, and you most likely won't see this review anyway; I just wanted to say that you wrote a really amazing story. Keep writing!
| MagicTrix17 chapter 5 . 5/31/2013
"If I die, I will haunt you," Sasuke warned him. "Every time a sock goes missing, every bump in the night, every rusty kunai… it will be me."
That was sooooooo Reba, which is awesome because I was considering incorporating a similiar statement into one of my fics and you made it hilarious and I loved it! Your story's pretty good too...and funny. Being funny is the best part about a story.
| Addiction's Curse chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
Simply amazing. I now understand why so many of my favourite authors had this in their favourites.
| A Midsummer chapter 12 . 5/10/2013
Family fluff. Aww.
| A Midsummer chapter 11 . 5/10/2013
Sasuke doing parenting. Who would have thought? Eh. At least it finally taught him patience. He needs a lot of it considering its Naruto.
| A Midsummer chapter 10 . 5/10/2013
That is one way of looking at Naruto's loudmouth monologues.