|Reviews for The Dark Principle|
| Starscream's Babygirl chapter 4 . 3/21/2011
omg nice total love it! :D keep up the goods work!
| kawaiitofuramen chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
5*s -thumbs up -
yay.. i get digital cokie now..
cant wait for the next chapter..
:D :D :D
| WindGoddess Rune chapter 4 . 2/17/2010
Awesome chapter! Who is Tanith working for? Can't wait for the next chapter! ;)
| Lady Akhisane chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
Yeah, you need to write more action scenes and battles, otherwise you won't improve in that area o.o -and it would make chapters longer :P .
Well, well, this Tanith is more than I expected, honestly. I though he'd be some dude who can fight, use weapons and stuff, but a crystal bearer! :O Oh, well it is only obvious. Is just I didn't think 'bout that at all u.u
Anyway, good chapters :D I'd like to start seeing that BellexKeiss soon. Take care.
| WindGoddess Rune chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Great chapter! I like to see a continue from the game. ;)
| WindGoddess Rune chapter 2 . 1/29/2010
Hmm...A LayleXTanith and KeissXBelle sounds nice to me. ;)
| anon chapter 2 . 1/29/2010
Tanith seems like a male version of Belle to me.
Also, no hmphing. Layle doesn't hmph.
Hmm, what else, what else... Layle should be less defensive. He's essentially a comic book hero; he's not supposed to lose his tempte or get petty unless it's cool. B
“Taking in strays?” Keiss murmurs. “Not like you.” (In the story it was like..."That's very unlike you...Layle.)
“Maybe I’ve changed,” I murmur back. Keiss snickers.
I think Keiss would get a bit expasperated with Layle here, and Layle would be speaking a bit more confidently. Like this:
Keiss: Balbalablabablbalba...not like you.
Layle: Maybe I've changed.
Keiss: Whatever you say, Crystal Bearer. *insert an oh you face here*
Layle: *fangirl squeal inducing smirk*
And baww, I was hoping for a little Layle/Keiss but oh well. :
I've always viewed the possible relationship of Belle/Keiss to be more of a brosis relationship...and OC stories rather bother me, but I'll try my best to keep reading.
| Lady Akhisane chapter 2 . 1/29/2010
Wow! That I didn't see coming, Tanith is going to be Layle's lover in this story? Wow... I mean, wow...
Well, about the BellexKeiss, eh I gues is ok xD In fact I pictured them as a couple since I started to watch my dad play Crystal Bearers, but at the end it looked like it was LaylexBelle over all ._. (that I didn't like) or maybe not, the ending left me so confused, and unsatisfied.
But hey! I like Tanith already xD It's so cute when he gets all selkie, stealing people's wallets :3 Oh my God, is this game actually too racist? xD Anyway, I liked the chapter. I must say, I really don't read yaoi, I have nothing againts it, is just not my thing. You must be very good author 'cause still I want to read your story to the very end P So please continue soon, so far you have pictured Layle very accurately, stick to the character :D
Have a nice weekend and thank you for the cookies 3! I just got me a glass of milk to go with these.
| anon chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I demand light slash and LaylexAlthea. B
| Lady Akhisane chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I want cookies :O !
Well, I don't really need them xD I just want you to know that I'll be following this story. It's starting, but to read about the ending of the game was awesome! I loved it, thoug it left me with many questions ._-. like "is Layle ever gonna return to home?" xD I'm glad that you're actually starting from that part, and have a little curiosity about the OC you're planning to put in the story.
Well, that's it, just wanted to give you my congratulations and please, please! continue soon :D
Oh, tbw, it makes me so happy that this ain't gonna be LayBelle or Bellayle, or whatever you call it xD I don't hate the pairing, but I don't like it either ._. Belle is too much... Eh, I don't know, sometimes she makes me want to kick her but P