|Reviews for Print|
| Beawr chapter 1 . 2/26
why hasn't this been updated? :(
| Meiyo no Ko chapter 4 . 1/18
Hmm... No real resolution to this chapter, which was a bit disappointing.
But I adore your premise and execution.
| LeRose chapter 4 . 11/14/2013
This isn't really finished right? Right?! If it is then you're seriously leaving us hanging. *sad face*
I hope you change your mind someday and continue this. It is a really great story!
| TavrosGamzee chapter 4 . 10/19/2013
I know this is technically finished, but dude- cliffhanger ending. Which is both good & bad. This story has a really interesting concept!
| rucifie chapter 4 . 10/10/2013
Has anyone ever told you that you have their voices down pat? Srsly, I dont even have to try, I hear them as them. And Sam's voice has to be my favorite so far but that's because he gets to be an asshole.
Hope you continue this!
| A Nest of Nargles chapter 4 . 8/31/2013
this story does not feel 'done'. the ending is too abrupt... other than that though, great story.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Funny! I hope you finish the story. :)
| Lady Cailin chapter 4 . 7/26/2013
This was awesome. I sincerely hope you haven't finished, or that there is a sequel somewhere I'm missing. Please considering continuing?
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
...please tell me this isn't the end. It can't be the end! There simply has to be more! It's so good, and I can't believe you'd really want to end it here, with so many loose ends and such a intriguing last line. I need to know what happens next! Unless there's a sequel? I hope there is, or that you realise you marked it as complete and write another chapter. Please?
| OneMoreLiving chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
| yeah chapter 2 . 6/17/2013
this turned me on way more than it should have.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2013
| whatifphillester chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
Please tell me you're joking! There has to be more!
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
Complete? no it's not! Please don't leave us hanging! This is an amazing story and such a great idea. I really loved the idea and you're not doing it justice by leaving it there... if you don't have time or whatever please give it to someone else on the site to finish for you.
| ChristinaCatastrophic chapter 4 . 5/4/2013
I thought this was supposed to be complete.