Reviews for Boxes
Bakerstreet Blues chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Very nice. You characterized House quite simply and happened to be correct...good for you.

KEEP WRITING and don't be afraid to post...
McGonagall's Bola chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This made me both laugh and go aww. Incredibly well-written!
dance. phalanges. dance chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Great insight into House's head! A few things, though...

One line says, "My idea own personal self had become..." I know what you're trying to say in the sentence, but you might want to clarify it. Also, you said, "behind the exterior"; you might want to change that to beneath. Other than those minor grammatical issues, a really fine job.

Thank you; keep writing,

-HumDrum Ø
ArtSharky864 chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
It's perfect. I love it :)

You're great!
pgrabia chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Very nicely done! You have great insight. Continue writing-you have a talent for it!