|Reviews for Suit Up!|
| 1WiththeButterfly chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
Oh, so thats where the suit scene came from.
As you might have guessed, I'm trying to expand my knowledge of Negima to get a better understanding of what's going down in the 2814-verse. And what better way than reading the fanfiction you just updated. that route got me into Nanoha pretty effectively :P
Barney is truly a god. I'm sure that much Legend-WAIT FOR IT-Dariness could not be contained in a mere mortal. Its not possible.
But that suit scene...I might need to take a cold shower.
Thats how good it is, it works through Computer screens and by passed Hope-powered forcefields.
Till Next Time
| Twilight-Destruction chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
I knew this would be updated based on the obviously inspired new chapter of TNo2814 :p
...still it explains a bit, like exactly how many sneezes Negi had were really accidental :D
Keep up the good work.
...some more Falling in Love would be nice _
| Sorakage Sama chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
I bow to your greatness!
| Jun March chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
...I was not expecting that.
Goes to show that Barney will appear where you least expect him.
(BTW, that IS Barney from 'How I Met Your Mother', right? I recognize the airplane episode from a few nights back...)
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
An amusing chapter, well done. I do think Setsuna looks better in a suit, plus there is always the option of turning the hat into a sort of bag of holding for all her stuff. And the sneeze move is classic, well done origin with Nagi and his wife.
| Morlin chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
As a big Setsuna fan I found this story totally awesome.
It was funny in the most crackalicious of ways. Well-written, especially Setsuna's preperation scene and her big reveal.
Overall I just enjoyed this immensely.
While it isn't likely, a follow-up fic would be much appreciated.
| BL4CKR1D3R chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
OMG, I dont know if this was the funniest or the worst story I have read. It's so bad that its hillarious, I assume that it was meant to be that way. However, while I laughed at how terribly lame the plot was I couldn't help but hate the way the characters act, good for a laugh, but for me shipping is serious buisiness! On a serious note however, if it was written as a joke and wasnt meant to be taken seriously at all, kudos to you, that was hillarious 9/10 for humour.
| Lord of Murder chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
lol epic win. gotta love the barnacle.
| ByLanternLight chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
The "Raging Pedos" line really made this story. 5/5.
| Drakedragon chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
My initial impression from outside sources was not good, though due more to a misunderstanding on my side. Long before I reached the end of this story, I was trying my absolute hardest not to laugh and cause a ruckus with my family sleeping.
This story is absolutely hilarious and I applaud you good sir. Not really a big fan of cross-dressing either, but when it comes to Setsuna - for some reason, it works.
Negi amused me greatly as well. All in all, an easy 10/10 for mostly good writing (I noticed a few minuscule mistakes here and there, nothing serious) and a lot of humor. :D
| Cloverfield chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
Oh. My. Word.
The suit has never looked so fine. Ah, you've combined everything I love about Barney and Setsuna into one scintillating package.
I love the lecherousness of 'Ojou-sama,' and the omake was the cheese on the cake 3
I want to buy a suit now.
Excellent humour, excellent premise, and cracktastic in the extreme :D
| Joshua-san0 chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Ah, this was funny, I particularly enjoyed Eva's line, "Do me. Do me now, do me hard, do me long!" The Omake was also good.
| RedSavant chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
...I'll review later when I can see the keyboard through my tears of laughter.
My god. Negi, Setsuna, and the Bro Code. It's like the perfect storm of crack. I haven't even SEEN HIMYM, and I still enjoyed this immensely.
| Dragemenian jew chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Ha ha! Loved the idea. And wow, Negi being such a pimp (he he! I knew he wasnt as innocent as he looked the little imp). Anyway, good work and Setsuna totally needed Negis advice (would be so much easier if he did it in the actual anime).
Am not usually into the whole crossdressing-thing (Im not repulsed by it but certainely not attracted to it) but with Setsuna this is a really logic thing to happen, lol. And hm... I believe shed look pretty hot in a suit...
| Arrietti chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
good job. I almost die from laughing too hard, your story totally makes my day. I love how Negi is acting like a player and tries to pass down his skills to setsuna
The omake is so funny XD
omg I love it!