Reviews for California Dreaming
Eslssl chapter 17 . 2/17/2017
Excellent storyline, steady pace moved story along, very good characters, plenty of fun banter and romance, hard to believe this is your first Castle FF.
Thank you for sharing your talents and looking forward to your other Castle stories.
Eslssl chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
Welcome to your first Castle fanfic story. Great start and catchy premise.
Naniela chapter 17 . 1/17/2016
I really enjoyed this story. Thank you for writting it :)
Frannielloyd chapter 17 . 11/18/2014
I enjoyed your story. I'll be reading more of them. Thank you for writing and sharing your works.
The-KLF chapter 17 . 2/18/2014
I've enjoyed reading this story! Going to go find the next installment now :)
GT500RonSmith chapter 17 . 5/4/2013
This was a really good story and I am very happy that was able to find and read it! Thanks very much!
GT500RonSmith chapter 16 . 5/4/2013
Did she ever actually say that she trusted him? I missed it if she did. But, her explanation as to why he was 'not just Rick Castle' was amazing! I see there is one more chapter, so I guess you came back with the epilogue! Good! And I saw that there are sequels, which I will be reading!
GT500RonSmith chapter 15 . 5/4/2013
The man's heart is destroyed. The woman is in misery and sees no other way. A looming fight that I dread. Lanie failing to get through to her. Not a lot of hope here. But, I have to tell you, when Lanie told Kate she just saw her break Castle's heart, I broke, too.
GT500RonSmith chapter 14 . 5/4/2013
What a shame that a simple kiss can cause such emotion in Kate. A perfectly innocent kiss from a seriously loving man. And the media ruins it. I wouldn't describe this as betrayal, so maybe this leads to it?
GT500RonSmith chapter 13 . 5/4/2013
I loved how awed he was at the sight of her. I try to envision these guys as Nathan and Stana, and Stana is such an elegant beauty that it is easy to understand how someone arriving at her door to take her to dinner would be completely taken in by her beauty. And the chemistry of the Caskett actors is amazing to witness! She is willing to try it once they return to NY as of right now. What about after the betrayal?
GT500RonSmith chapter 12 . 5/4/2013
Well, I did not think of that as a secret as to why he wanted her along. However, you had him say it really well and Kate consenting was heavenly! I hope you go through the dinner, but I am still sweating the betrayal!
GT500RonSmith chapter 11 . 5/4/2013
First off, I think it works pretty well actually. What I don't get is how this man, that readily admits that he cannot get Kate out of his system, can not understand that he is already in love with her. Good grief, Charlie Brown!
GT500RonSmith chapter 10 . 5/4/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Your anticipation as to how you feel about this one may be because the seduction was quicker that you might have expected it to be. My feeling is that for this to have happened at this pace, Lanie must have been the influence that drove it. I hope the dinner goes well, but I am thinking that may be where the betrayal comes in and now I am thinking it will come from Castle, not Kate. And if it does, I know it is not intentional. He would not hurt Kate if he was aware he was doing so.
GT500RonSmith chapter 9 . 5/4/2013
Nice little chapter. Lot of thoughts from her about not sleeping with him! Kind of think she will eventually change her mind unless we get to the betrayal firs!
GT500RonSmith chapter 8 . 5/4/2013
I loved the way you forced there stories, but I dread this betrayal you have mentioned twice now! I so dread the betrayal!
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