|Reviews for Killer Cabbage|
| Levells chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Now I'll finally understand all those little references you always slip in your other fics!
lol, words little kids shouldn't use. yes, still here :3
lmao. Several of your stories prompt "wtf?" responses xD
Kai making someone a sandwich? :o
5:30? who's up at that hour? sheesh, some of us are trying to get some sleep
huh. mechanical. you did say someone may be a robot...
Kai has imposters?
lol. well, I suppose it would make him even hungrier to make it himself
so weird seeing Kai like this.
lol. Well, that sounds a little more like Kai. "Eat it."
lol. Guess Kai didn't follow directions so well :3
oooh, an old traumatic childhood incident that caused lifelong scarring
lmao. I 3 ["sanwich" and (A/N: Sanwich is not a typo. Thank you for understanding.)]
lol. I thought he'd ask what cabbage was :3 darn
haha. yes, big boy :D
aw, ruined it with a "baby" comment, lol
is it stuck? can't think I've seen a time when it was such a struggle to pull something out xD
:o cabbageball, anyone?
well, that explains why he doesn't like it. but you said he doesn't like the taste either. was he brave enough to try it at some point?
huh, mechanical Kai said he didn't do it. Who could be out to poison Tala so?
lmao. Yes, magical flying cabbage is out for you Tala :3
yeah, Kai's def a robot. no emotion in response to a request to take another 20 minutes to make a flippin' sandwich
secret ingredient...ground up cabbage? mixed with the mayo/mustard/whatever, perhaps?
uh oh. Cabbage doesn't care who it takes out, as long as it gets to him :3
lol, bet Ray and Bryan would use one for that reason (episode II: attack of the fangirls)
a couple of hours? yeah, he was definitely planning to replace the team with robots to cut down on complaints/annoyances. My guess is Tyson would be the one to be replaced xD
favorite lines: "What the hell? You're a robot! Where's the real Kai?"
"Probably laughing his ass off at you right now."
oh yes, I said "wtf?" a few times :3
and it was funneh, too
There's a bit of red on my screen from stabbing the green thing, so I hope you're happeh and consider my words great :3
| InsanityRulez chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
lmao that was funnyXD i bet Tala screamed after robot Kai said cabbageXD
| MagnetaNightfall chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Well, this was certainly interesting. :D A robot? Kai's idea? Hmmm, you sure the Kai who asked for the robot Kai to be made, wasn't a robot himself? Ok...that didn't make sense. XD
Poor Tala, he's been scarred for life by that nasty cabbage! :O A deluxe sandwhich? Nice :P
| DancerInTheDark101 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Great story! Haha, Tala got attacked by Cabbage and it scarred him for life. And the fact that Kai added his 'secret ingredient' to Tala's 'amazing' sandwich and he liked it was classic.
Didn't notice any spelling errors or anything like that, which is great. Very well written.
All in all, great story! :)
| Mistress of the Arts chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
i did say "wtf?". alot actually. lol.
this was very creative. loved the robot bit. poor kai. always being picked on by us loving fans of his.
cabbage. Wow. totally unexpected. ROFL.
I LOVED IT, BABE! Great work. Needed a good laugh :)
Write more funnies! With Raul! lolz!
-Eidolon Twilight Princess 3 3
| Beywriter chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
That was freaky, completely disturbing.
| Inyoface chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Hahah, this was so random!
I did actually say WTF!
| khooxp chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
LOL! Kai playing a trick on Tala... and he didn't realise for so many days? XD Aw i want a mechanical Kai. XD. But the part at the end where Tala wanted to know the secret ingredient and when it was cabbage was funny!
XD I said 'wtf' out loud. XD. And i have stabed the green button with my white arrow. And i didn't miss! I'm a great archer! XD
This is a humorous story, and it's great (: Keep up the good work~ XD
| ASlaveToWords chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
lmao. well, first off, very nice poetry at the end there, "Please stab the green button nearby and leave me great words to remember you by!" Whether it was intentional or not :P
Second of all: yes i most definitely did say "wtf" Or more accurately "What the F*ck?" But it did make me laugh a few times :P. When i was reading the flashbacks and half way down i was thinking 'wow... i dont get this' and 'man kai is so OOC' and i was kinda unimpressed at first i must admit... but then i got to the end XD hahaha. i should have known better! You never disappoint! XD VERY funny! And poor Tally XD :
"What did you put in my sandwiches? It tasted really good."
"What, my additional ingredient?"
"Yeah, that one. What was it?"
Aw man! would have loved to have seen Tala's reaction to that one XD lmao! Poor, poor Tala *huggles redhead* 3
Funny story and very original idea XD Can't wait for more! 3
| Ms Controversy chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
LOL! This was great hahaha! Reminds me of an episode of Arthur (if you know that cartoon) where DW hates spinach but eats it accidentally and ends up liking it hahahhaa
| No Longer Active Here chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
I love random, pointless humour :) Not many people manage to write humour well so what you have here is quite remarkable - I was smiling the whole entire time. Always good to meet another humour/parody author gracing the Beyblade fandom.
Like the title and I totally agree with Tala - I hate cabbage too. Terrible taste and terrible to look at. (shudder) Hee hee, poor Tala, he ended up eating cabbage. Sneaky Kai.
| Alice's-Love chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
ya WTF is a good response,
but it was really funny! D
hehehe killer cabage