Reviews for Slowly Slipping Away
Kaeri chapter 10 . 7/22
Chapter three is missing and chapter ten is a duplicate of a previous chapter. Good story but all these missing chapters are killing it for me.
Niquie chapter 3 . 7/21
Nice story so far! I am really enjoying Sayuri's character. I'm sorry to hear that people have been stealing your work. Plagerism sucks and is totally inexcusable. Hopefully it has stopped. I have a question about chapter 3. Last chapter ends partway through the bell test and the next one picks up midway through the land of wave mission. I was wondering what happened to chapter 3's content? All that's here is the author's note and I'd really like to read it if possible. :)
Once again, nice job with your story and I look forward to reading more!
- Niquie
ToshimiOkami chapter 10 . 7/21
Umm... Chapter 10 is tree climbing again...
SleepAroundTheClock chapter 26 . 3/2
I want more Saito!
KuraiNezumichan chapter 34 . 3/21/2014
I just finished your story! It was amazing! I love it :D you did so well incorporating your OCs into the story it was just like they were already a part of the naruto storyline. I love it xD gonna start reading your next story soon!
Guest chapter 32 . 10/20/2013
I think Gaara is spelled like this...
Not Garaa.
Imaginary Girl Of Sapphire chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
I luv your story! It was soooo cute when u made sasuke blush! XD and I luv your OC she's so like able and I love two different eye colors! Just LUV this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I like type sorry, but just the eye color thing just didn't feel right. I read the sequel to for this story and like the plot and how everything worked with your oc. I just don't likehow she is from a clan that controls elements, but then i realize that mei tumeru had it
Guest chapter 14 . 7/5/2013
In that part he's a she
gohanFanfics chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I'm just re-reading it since I love it so much :D
Hunter of Shadows chapter 25 . 7/26/2012
I love your story! Its really good, i cant stop reading it.
OrangeandSpiceTeaLover chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I read your whole in just a couple days and loved it.
laniDG11 chapter 34 . 3/8/2012
laniDG11 chapter 33 . 3/3/2012
Love it:)
Crystal Flare chapter 33 . 3/3/2012
your story was wonderful xD i read it in about 2 days or so, couldn't stop myself . i can't wait to see the chars in the second part~!
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