|Reviews for Rocky returns|
| r.k.kat chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Wow that was gr8!plz update soon!
| JustAnArtist chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
As a Chicken Run fan, I loved this so far. All though, some help can I get to you. Use dots in end of sentences, it's hard to read and knowing who's who. Story line is way awesome!
Short shit about me, I draw them and is their number one fan.. believe me :) I will post up some of my stories as well. Check out my art if you want to /view/3378739
they are my own characters all of them, is also my fictions characters. Ok have a nice day and keep this story going! It's doing GREAT!
| spotty-bee chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Your Fanfiction is coming along nicely.
Yet.. Maybe I be Nit Pickish? When your writing, it would make it easier for the reader if you would make a new paragraph each time a new person talks.
Like - Mac said this
Ginger said that, patted Mac on the back and left
Mac mutters something and left as well.
I still like your idea though. I had one like this myself, but its in a diffrent drection... like a lot more tragic.
Good luck with the story.