Reviews for Penumbra
resvieira chapter 5 . 7/6/2010

Have you forgotten about us?

Ive already saw Eclipse twice and just as the book it is definitely my favorite!

Cant wait to hear your words on Edwards thoughts.

Hope to hear from you soon!
Rimlis chapter 5 . 5/25/2010
Dear Riniel

Thank you for another chapter. I just loved it so much. You paced it well as you have all of the other chapters. This chapter is important as it moves Edward and Bella away from their homes into a situation where they will need to negotiate new challenges and Edward will rely on Bella to ease quite a few difficulties. Edward and Bella are so engaging and you have captured beautifully their deepening relationship while retaining the magic of first sweet love. (I particularly loved the scene of reading on the plane). All the little things that Edward and Bella do for each other are so important for healing. It was good to read that Edward now understands that he underestimated Bella's love for him. I think that you are carefully showing us some of the steel in Bella whick will continue to surprise Edward. Cant wait for the next of your great chapters. Please dont keep us waitng too long...
xXxLove.At.First.BitexXx chapter 5 . 5/25/2010
Oh my gosh, this story is AMAZING! :O

I only just started reading it, and let me say you are a brilliant author :) Please update soon!

Favourited ;)
ernrs chapter 5 . 5/24/2010
I can't wait to hear more- Please don't make us wait so long, but I can't say anything. I cannot even write a creative paragraph.
dkrainier chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
As I always I very much enjoyed your work. Just a small detail that doesn't involve changes, but since I'm a 'local': They wouldn't be able to see downtown Seattle on the way to the Sea Tac airport. The airport is actually halfway between Seattle and Tacoma (thus the Sea Tac) and isn't really in Seattle at all. Like I said, just a fun fact. Great job, I can't wait to see what happens in Florida!
appleburple chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
Great chapter. I love your insightfulness. You bring out thoughts that I never contemplated before but that make sense once you read them.

Thanks for sharing you story.
Pistis Sophia chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
i love this chapter...:)
soton chapter 4 . 5/22/2010
Really enjoying the close relationship between Edward and Alice. I love how they look out for each other.

Eclipse is my favourite book of the series - but I really want to kick Bella's butt over her goings on with Jacob. It makes me really mad how Bella hurts Edward's feelings again and again!

There are just no words that capture how I feel about Jacob's part in all of this...
soton chapter 2 . 5/22/2010
Reading from EPOV is much more enjoyable and intense.

I have just booked my advanced ticket (midnight viewing 2/7/10 UK) for Eclipse - yay! ;p Penumbra is really getting me in the mindset for my favourite book of the Twilight Saga - go Team Edward!
alybee chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
First, I love your writing...but I have a question - Maybe I missed something but if they left Seattle at 4:15 p.m. Pacific it would be 7:15 p.m. Eastern. A five hour trip would have them arriving in Florida around 12:15 a.m. How were they arriving at 7:15 p.m. in Florida?

I do like seeing things from Edward's view and I think you do a remarkable job displaying that. Can't wait until the next chapter.
La.Tua.Cantante.83 chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
Oh my gosh, I ALSO LOVE Muse's new song. By far one of my favorites! Anyway, this chapter is so wonderful. I love the "normal" moments in their life. So sweet. I am continually floored by this story (silly, because I knew I'd love it) but each moment that we didn't see in Eclipse was like a little gem. I can't WAIT to read about thier time in Jacksonville!

Thanks for the update. Take all the time you need!
crmcneill chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
Great stuff, as always. One of the things I enjoy most about your stories is how you felsh out things that are mentioned only in passing in the novels. Keep up the good work.
Cullenfan524 chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
Awesome! I can't wait to see what you have in store for them in Florida. I was always disappointed SM didn't include for of it in the book.
rockstarvampire chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
I can't believe you don't have hundreds more reviews! Metamorphosis was all kinds of amazing and that's the main reason I'm still reading this one. I have to admit Eclipse was my least favorite of the 4 books but your reasoning behind why it's your favorite and your superb writing are changing my mind. But, then again, I like everything in Edward's POV. :) I'm excited for the next chapter!
Child of the True King chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
I really love this chapter! :D Great work :)
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