|Reviews for Sin|
| Idris The Tardis chapter 10 . 1/21/2013
you should wwrite a sequel where Despereaux breaks out of prison and and the FBI have to get called in to find him and they discover the cover up.
| deLoonii chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I was reading this on my smartphone during a long car ride and oh my gods, I love this story! I would have never thought that Shawn so helpless or that Despereaux could be so dark. I really love this, I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner.
| Post U Later chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Wow... Shawn's Totally In Love With Pierre! XD
I Think He Should Either Take Himself Of The Despereaux Case & Tell Pierre He Loves Him, Or Stop The Meetings With Pierre. Those Are The Only Potions I Can See.
| Post U Later chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Oh Snap! Shawn's In Deep! (Well Technically Despereaux Was 'In' Deep... Lol I Made A Sex Joke! XP)
| Authoress of Evil chapter 10 . 8/11/2011
Well that was intriguing. Despereaux's a total creepy asshole, but it was intriguing. A good read. Very nauseating and disturbing, and... dang if it didn't suck for Shawn. But it had a... not tragic ending, so that's good, I guess.
I enjoyed it. To the extent that it can be enjoyed. I mean, it's kind of disturbing, in the way that this kind of story is. But it was a good read. I'm just not on my 'strong-stomach' game, and I think I may have had some bad frozen pizza earlier, so I'm not coming up with a good enough review... -sigh-
No matter, this was pretty good. :)
| Authoress of Evil chapter 6 . 8/10/2011
Oh you son of a bitch. You just totally ruined Princess Bride for me. Now, instead of sweet, charming Westley saying to Buttercup "As you wish" for absolutely everything, I see devious, messed up, sicko Desperaeux saying "as you wish" to Shawn after he backed him into a corner... Bastard... I can't believe this! This is just wrong... so wrong...
(BTW: This is wicked good!)
I am so disgusted with this right now. I mean, how could you ruin such an iconic line? I feel... enraged. Irked! IRED! Yes, quite irate. Mmmhmm.
| Icing Flower chapter 10 . 7/11/2011
I finished reading the whole thing in one go. Yes it was that great. I simply loved it. Imagine my delight to find a fanfic centered on my two favorite Psych characters and my favorite guest character - The inclusion of Despereaux made my day. _
Yes it was darkish, but it fit considering the nature of Despereaux's character. Great work on this fic. Congrats on finishing it. _
| 101spacemonkey chapter 10 . 6/18/2011
woot! so happy to see this :D
| Gothicragdoll chapter 10 . 6/16/2011
I like this ending way better. It's almost a shame that this is "(This time it really is) THE END." This story is fantastic. The way you depict Despereaux is perfect, and the whole idea is marvelous. You're an awesome writer. Thanks for sharing!
| GinnyMastrani chapter 9 . 1/31/2011
Fantastic! I love the stories where the authors like kills Shawn and then they hand him Lassie and say "Hope you feel better!"
| Gothicragdoll chapter 9 . 1/15/2011
There needs to be more Shawn/Despereaux stories, though I doubt they would be as good as this one. This is seriously the best story I've read in quite some time. Thank you so much for sharing. I look forward to seeing more work from you.
| JiraiyaWhitney chapter 9 . 1/14/2011
**IN ALL CAPS**
***SERIOUSLY! I'm NOT KIDDING! IT'S NOT A CAPSLOCKFAIL ITS SER-EE-US!***
On the one hand I love how this chapter turned out. On the other I have a weird near-melancholy(sp?) mix of sadness and happiness that it is over. On the third random-dead-guy's-hand that Shawn Psychic-ed-Up the answer to, I kind of want to know how some of the "and everyone lived unhappily ever after" chapters turned out.
| jess chapter 9 . 1/13/2011
i m so glad to find this updated! a tad too short for my liking(if it is up to me, i'd like this to be continued for ten more chapters, as it is so good!), but an excellent end nonetheless. great work!
i will wait eagerly for the epilogue.
i will be even happier if you can write a sequel... so we can see shawn and lassiter actually being together... maybe despearux can escape present and abduct shawn and then lassie to the rescue! or something like that...
| Nefarious61 chapter 9 . 1/13/2011
That's great. Close with a gunshot, open with a can of pudding. lol I like how you ended it. I think it's more realistic this way than a happily ever after or a tragic "Shawn dies" ending. Throughout this whole story, you got everyone's voices down pat. Great job. Looking forward to the epilogue.
| Otherwise Known As chapter 9 . 1/12/2011
awww. im so sad this is over. . . but still this was amazing and you did a fantastic in my top 10 favorite shasies of all time!