Reviews for You'll Be the Death of Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is an emotional work of art. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not too bad..it's better than the mushy ones out there..that totally take OOC. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this shit is toppest of tiers |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for this gem. I truly loved it so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() To those who just came across this story without knowing DB at all(if that is even possible), the story would turn out disappointing. As for me, I like it. I don't need an elaborate happy ending for this since I know what will happen to this couple in the future. I understand Vegeta is in the denial stage but it is apparent how much he loves Bulma. It's obvious by the way he was affected when he thought Bulma bore Yamcha's child. Thanks for sharing this story! I hope you write more VegeBul fanfics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think the pills issue was lame. As advanced as DB universe is, surely the contraceptive pills would've worked for her just like they do to us in real life. I wish you could've come up with a believable situation why she got pregnant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Didn't Bulma take contraceptive pills I gotta know how she got pregnant. It seems to me, the last paragraph of this chapter implies Trunks was conceived. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a very infuriating chapter, not that it wasn't good, but still, infuriating. I understand Yamcha did what he did because of his love for Bulma, but seriously! the guy has no common sense! He should realize, attacking and warning Vegeta is futile. Also, I have to remind you, you've forgotten Puar. She and Yamcha are almost inseprable, so I find it odd that she wasn't around since chapter 1. I love Bulma's father! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jealous Vegeta is always adorable. You forgot to mention if they drank any soda btw. Pizza without drinks doesn't feel right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always imagine their lovemaking to be intense, especially coming from Vegeta. I bet Saiyans have great sexual drive as much as their appetite for food. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The frog scene was comical! Way to go for making me laugh along with Vegeta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Mr. Prince Vegeta of the Saiyans." LMAO! Still sounded so arrogant the way he said that. Anyway...poor Yamcha as always. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() When will they bang already? I want them to do it asap! Damn Mr. Briefs for interrupting them! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Vegeta! He sure suffered a lot, and I'm glad that despite his coldness, Bulma tried to empathize with him. She is the perfect woman for him! Hands down! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though I'm a huge Vegebul fan, I couldn't help but feel sorry for Yamcha too. He didn't deserve that kind of heartache! After all, he and Bulma had been together for a long time. In canon, I always like to think that they broke up on friendly terms. Yamcha sure didn't hold a grudge throughout the series though! He even said "Way the go Goku and Vegeta!" After they were revived in Buu saga. I actually searched Tik Tok on youtube. It's not on my playlist but I'm familiar with the song as soon as I heard it! ;) |