|Reviews for Breakeven|
| Pouda-P chapter 1 . 3/16
I'm not crying. You are crying :((
| MissBlueSunglasses chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
my heart :(
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase! Dont die!
| Ib-chan chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
Ahh I cried so much! I just wanted to hug Ed and comfort him ;-; Good job on invoking emotions within me, by the way. You should do a sequel/second part in which Ed either comes back to Al and Winry after the war, scarred/depressed, or where he dies and it shows the story from Al's/Winry's POV.
| TheCandyChild chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Oh my gOD WHY MY HEART IS BROKEN
| 14325643468696786078 chapter 1 . 6/4/2015
I'm bawling right now. Like, my god, this didn't tug my heartstrings, hell no! It yanked 'em right out. So emotional and beautifully written, I loved it! Awesome job!
| Becky chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This is so good, I ship Edwin so much and this broke my heart, it's truly touching, you're an amazing writer.
| jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
This is so sad. I kkept hoping that things would turn around and that they would somehow end up together. Great description with the picture and actually II even liked the song very fitting
| 69AnimeFreak69 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
| AnguaMarten chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
god, this broke me. it's really plausible and in-character, which naturally only makes it more depressing. beautifully written. although i honestly think it would've been stronger without the song lyrics.
| Caramelized chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
That tugged on my heartstrings like nobody's business.
I can't even begin to say how sad this was :c.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Holy troll nails, there was so much emotions in it! Very well done!
| Sofipitch chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
This is a really good fic! I really enjoyed reading it. And it was really well written.
Keep it up!
| Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I like angst, as long as it's the emotional, well-written sort and not the teenage sort. (This was the former. No worries, that wasn't a criticism.) Unfortunately, there's that part of me that likes happy endings. They tend to argue a lot.
I really can't decide what I thought of this fic. Your prose was excellent and the premise was certainly very interesting, but it was just so very depressing.
Either way, I really liked the way you integrated the song. I don't like it when people put the lyrics every few lines and actually try to write the fic around them. I prefer them this way.
Great story, really, but... -sighs-
| ninjas-are-everywhere chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
That was awesome and followed the song well!
It was the first EdWin I've read without them ending up together. It's kind of sad but really well written!