|Reviews for A Bad Sign|
| Apocalyptical Angel chapter 2 . 10/26/2013
I'm loving the plot you've got going. How interesting... Sammy has a wife he can't remember...
Silly Sammy ;)
Your spelling and grammar is better in chapter two than one, you can tell you took some time between posting them. You might want to go back Chapter One, reword a few sentences so they make better sense and read easier.
But I really like the fic idea, it definitely has potential!
I think you should carry on.
I'll admit, despite the amount I LOVE supernatural, I am a Dean-girl so it's difficult to love Sammy, but yes, please continue this fic. I think Sam girls will love this, you just need to slap some more plot into it and jazz up the first chapter a bit.
Oh, also; I ADORED the description in chapter one, very lovely. Just a few grammatical errors that need polishing up to make it sparkle.
| pickamix chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Sorry it took me so long to get to this. It never showed up in my inbox as posted and I had to remember that you mentioned posting it.
Good second chapter... I'm glad that she's not all over Sam that would be the all too obvious route to go. Though I do have a question... if her and Sam were just fun and games why is she wearing the ring still? or did she just put that back on when she started looking for him?
| samgirl19 chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
oh boy what did sam get himself into
| samgirl19 chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
dun dun dun and cue music oh sam is in big trouble
| Leahelisabeth chapter 2 . 3/2/2010
Interesting, i hope Sam remembers what happens. I always wanted Sam to get married. I hope you update soon!
| pickamix chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Ok now I'm breaking my own little rule here for you. I'm not as into Supernatural these days as I used to be so I set up a rule to not read Supernatural fanfic unless it was finished. But since it's you...
This wasn't a bad start. There was good action and it was a good build up.
You could use a beta to help you take care of some of your grammar errors but other than that I see nothing wrong with this.