This was a great, and relaxing read, the irony of it. I work in a pharmacy! I anxiously await the next chapter, and hope that your exams are going well

Cheers!

Oh, what a wonderful story! Your characterization is full-fleshed and convincing, and the plot is engaging.

My only criticism is that it is sometimes a little difficult to follow what is going on in some places, but only a very small smidgen.

I'd love to know what San's brother's problem is!

Please do continue; I'd love to read more.

This is really well written, and interesting. I definitely didn't see San being deaf coming. Moving on to next chapter!

neat twist to this story.

This was great and I LOVED the poem...well done.

I love this story. The writing is wonderful, and I feel like I can relate to the characters. I admit that when I first started reading I expected sue-ness, but I was pleasantly surprised.

Also, your disclaimers make me laugh. Thanks for the bit of humor.

Spongy fellis ground to a paste induced a calming sleep, Its depends on what part of the tree it comes from. for the fruit is boiling to get out what is needed.

Over all good inaction,the former headwoman aid the jr queen rider. just like Rill from Moreta's time, who was up before the staff at Fort Hold. Good background, for Zgen Weyr is on spot on Pern we don't real see much of. A bit in Six Pass. Sorry for the odd review at the moment my fingers are finding harder to type.

Oh, Rachel, I love the way you conveyed Palmas' consternation, her frustration with herself. I am really loving your story and am very anxious to see more. Your writing is descriptive and concise and very moving. Thank you!

We know from the White Dragon that sports happen - guess Vorlith is another.

I love your descriptions; of people, places, feelings. Are you by chance studying writing?

Waiting, not so patiently, for more!

Thank you again!

This is my second reading of your wonderful story. I couldn't find words after the first reading. Not sure I can find appropriate words now. I cried for Sannel at several points, sometimes with sorrow and sometimes with joy. You are doing a wonderful job with this story, and I hope you will continue adding more chapters.

Thank you!

Well I will be looking forward to the next chapter of this very well written story. I really don't much like Helana, she seems to be a bit of a B*.

Very good...I think the boy should be whomped upside the head. silly fool...he should be proud she impressed a Gold.(Whom I LOVE) Continuing on now.

I have hesitated to read any Pern fan fics as I am a huge fan of the originals. This is one of the first I have read and I must say you are doing a GRAND job. So far this is an interesting and entertaining story. A Great Chapter as was the first! I will be reviewing the chapters individually from now on.

The message sounds dangerous. Now we have to wait to see what it is all about.

Good background. Well written.

I hope that you continue to do well on your studies.