Reviews for Loyalty
ShadowMiki chapter 1 . 2/6
YES.
CaptinBenny chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
This was fabulous. I really enjoyed the inner turmoil the two went through to come to terms with the future.
MaskedDemon chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Loved it! Great job!
NakrellTakima chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Nice
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
awesome story. I love how it ended and everything! but i couldn't help when you said that the headboard was making noise, how loud that must've been in Gaz's room. xDDD i can imagine her waking up and looking all tired and going, "they will pay..." xDDD lol
TC9 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Epic! XD I kept leaning closer and closer until my nose was pressed against the screen.
Angelwings2000 chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
genius!
i found ZADR today and i can't get enough!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
what no feelings stop that
i don't ship this. this isn't my ship
why do i have feels for it
god you're great though.
CordialBloodBath chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
OMG such a sexy story! I love it!
OutwardLee chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Very intersting plot line! I loved the relationship you built, very beilivable. The moral conflict introduced in this peice was a great touch. Overall, great story. My only negitive say about this writing is you should have mayhapes had one of the charters say that they loved the other and thats all that mattered. But maybe , that was apart of the allure of the story. Your a fair author.
Artemis Fortune chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
See! That's an ending that would make sense! Forte
shygirl04 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
It was nice in a sense :) Loved the ending the most though :P
SylvieNe chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I don't usually review fanfics, but this was awesome. I loved how in-character they were and it was really cute overall. 3

One of my favorites for sure.
henslight chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
asking to choose one then you choosing both when YOU are ask...that's quit selfish zim :P
MelindaHeimberg chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
omg that was naughty i loved it
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