Reviews for If You're Reading This
Tennisballer747 chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
I like the concept of this story. I was wondering they start out in England. If not, where r they living before they go to roslings?
skiittish chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
please update soon! really enjoying this story! (:
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 15 . 2/26/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS! I adore William and Lizzie, they are so cute and i love Jane and Charlie! I knew when their parents came there would be a catastrofe at some point!

Please let William and Lizzie become a couple and save Lizzie from annoying Collins! He is disgusting and a pain in the but! (even to read about)
FiaGiggles chapter 15 . 1/8/2011
Super duper story, I ust found it and I loved it!

Please update soon, it's so brilliant!

...The only sad thing about P&P is that Darcy ALWAYS makes a fool of himself with the first addresses. I wonder how you're going to write that and I'm really looking forward to that chapter. ;)

As well as to every new chapter, that is.

Violet Essence chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
Hey! Can't wait to see how this will because it's really good so far and I loveeee it when stories are modernized! I just find it so adorable. And even though I only read the first 2 chapters, I'm soooo excited to see how you'll develop this! Already, I'm hooked with this fanific

oh and by the way, i LOVE the title a way, it reminds me of a sad love letter...and I love it!

Merrri chapter 15 . 11/23/2010

What are striations?


Merrri :)
Merrri chapter 14 . 11/23/2010

Well done. Colin Collins is such a Creep! you've captured him nicely... ewww...

Keep up the good work!

Merrri :)
Johonna Marie chapter 13 . 11/22/2010
i like the style and the way the story's going.

but, at least to me, re reading large portions of dialog just to read different characters reactions is a little boring. I end up having to skim over a large part of the chapter because it seems like it was copied from the paragraphs proceeding it, just changed a tiny bit.

I really like where the story is going and the way the characters are portrayed though.

well that's my 2 cents, keep em or spend em on gum as ya choose. just write on!
Johonna Marie chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
Ta da!

I'm reviewing. I thought it was a great modernization of the first ball. Mother and all.

I was read the story from ch. 1 on so this is my review of all chapters. Count it as ch. 11 review.

I can't wait to read more!

And good luck with ur project!
ILoveDT chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
It's great! Keep the chapters coming!
Avanell chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
nice update! Oh, Darcy! Put that foot in your mouth just a bit more, eh?
Merrri chapter 12 . 11/21/2010

Well done. You did the ball neatly and concisely. I'd like a bit more of Darcy though... You write his thoughts well, and it's nice to know what he's thinking.

Keep it up,

Merrri :)
andi1624 chapter 10 . 11/10/2010
Good chapter:) You did a good job of editing this one, its soo much easier to read without typos, good job:)I'm looking forward to more!
Merrri chapter 10 . 11/8/2010
Oh dear...This is NOT going to be good...

Man, is Lizzy's family embarising. Putting them into a modern situation makes it really obvious...

Well done, and thanks.

I don't know how I'm going to get though the mortivication of the ball though :)

Let me guess...Incoming Whickham? :)

Merrri :)

PS. I'm not sure I like this silly Jane, although, to be fair her family did live in America beforehand. But, yeah... chapter 10 . 11/7/2010 'Nough said.
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