|Reviews for If You're Reading This|
| Tennisballer747 chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
I like the concept of this story. I was wondering they start out in England. If not, where r they living before they go to roslings?
| skiittish chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
please update soon! really enjoying this story! (:
| ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 15 . 2/26/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS! I adore William and Lizzie, they are so cute and i love Jane and Charlie! I knew when their parents came there would be a catastrofe at some point!
Please let William and Lizzie become a couple and save Lizzie from annoying Collins! He is disgusting and a pain in the but! (even to read about)
| FiaGiggles chapter 15 . 1/8/2011
Super duper story, I ust found it and I loved it!
Please update soon, it's so brilliant!
...The only sad thing about P&P is that Darcy ALWAYS makes a fool of himself with the first addresses. I wonder how you're going to write that and I'm really looking forward to that chapter. ;)
As well as to every new chapter, that is.
| Violet Essence chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
Hey! Can't wait to see how this will because it's really good so far and I loveeee it when stories are modernized! I just find it so adorable. And even though I only read the first 2 chapters, I'm soooo excited to see how you'll develop this! Already, I'm hooked with this fanific
oh and by the way, i LOVE the title too...in a way, it reminds me of a sad love letter...and I love it!
| Merrri chapter 15 . 11/23/2010
What are striations?
| Merrri chapter 14 . 11/23/2010
Well done. Colin Collins is such a Creep! you've captured him nicely... ewww...
Keep up the good work!
| Johonna Marie chapter 13 . 11/22/2010
i like the style and the way the story's going.
but, at least to me, re reading large portions of dialog just to read different characters reactions is a little boring. I end up having to skim over a large part of the chapter because it seems like it was copied from the paragraphs proceeding it, just changed a tiny bit.
I really like where the story is going and the way the characters are portrayed though.
well that's my 2 cents, keep em or spend em on gum as ya choose. just write on!
| Johonna Marie chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
I'm reviewing. I thought it was a great modernization of the first ball. Mother and all.
I was read the story from ch. 1 on so this is my review of all chapters. Count it as ch. 11 review.
I can't wait to read more!
And good luck with ur project!
| ILoveDT chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
It's great! Keep the chapters coming!
| Avanell chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
nice update! Oh, Darcy! Put that foot in your mouth just a bit more, eh?
| Merrri chapter 12 . 11/21/2010
Well done. You did the ball neatly and concisely. I'd like a bit more of Darcy though... You write his thoughts well, and it's nice to know what he's thinking.
Keep it up,
| andi1624 chapter 10 . 11/10/2010
Good chapter:) You did a good job of editing this one, its soo much easier to read without typos, good job:)I'm looking forward to more!
| Merrri chapter 10 . 11/8/2010
Oh dear...This is NOT going to be good...
Man, is Lizzy's family embarising. Putting them into a modern situation makes it really obvious...
Well done, and thanks.
I don't know how I'm going to get though the mortivication of the ball though :)
Let me guess...Incoming Whickham? :)
PS. I'm not sure I like this silly Jane, although, to be fair her family did live in America beforehand. But, yeah...
| simply.complex.love chapter 10 . 11/7/2010
I...would...hate...to...have... ...as...my...mom. 'Nough said.