|Reviews for Gloaming|
| Guest chapter 37 . 12/21/2017
I am sorry but i hate Bella in this story she chose a man over her children and walked out on them what a terrible mother she is also she did not deserve a happy ending i was hoping that Quil would kill Edward for taking his mother away from him and his sister .
| kezcullen chapter 28 . 11/25/2017
loved loved this chapter!
| Lillywhite1 chapter 39 . 10/11/2017
Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
| Elise de Sallier chapter 37 . 10/1/2017
Lovely conclusion. I'm glad they found their way back to one another.
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful, creative talent.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 36 . 10/1/2017
I hadn't expected Bella to have trouble with blood lust, but it explains why she stayed away so long.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 35 . 10/1/2017
Oh, how sad that Bella didn't get to see her children for years. She certainly paid a high price to be with Edward.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 34 . 10/1/2017
I'm glad they are together and so happy. Here's hoping Bella can be reunited with her children quickly.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 33 . 10/1/2017
So sad. It's hard to picture peace between them all.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 32 . 10/1/2017
Wow! That was sudden! I can't wait to see how it turns out. .I just hope everyone survives.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 30 . 10/1/2017
I don't think I could have done that...left my children for a few years. I can't see them forgiving her if she does.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 29 . 10/1/2017
How sad. A relationship between Bella and Quil seems impossible now. :(
| Elise de Sallier chapter 28 . 10/1/2017
I like that this Bella can be assertive and state her needs and desires. She's right. She can't be the only one making sacrifices, especially when hers are so enormous.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 27 . 10/1/2017
Wow! Bella hit him with it all at once. I wonder if explaining vampire mating in comparison to imprinting would help?
| Elise de Sallier chapter 26 . 10/1/2017
This Bella is very brave, but I guess so was young canon Bella. Both are good at ignoring fairly obvious concerns! Where does Bella see this relationship with Edward going?
| Elise de Sallier chapter 25 . 10/1/2017
You are very welcome for the reviews. I'm really enjoying this story and definitely plan on reading your others.
I 'm glad things are working out for Quil. I'm hoping imprinting will help him understand what's happening with Bella, but I'm not holding my breath! He is Jake's son after all.