Reviews for Jolt
pikachucat chapter 11 . 2/3/2013
awesome more please
Multiversity chapter 11 . 5/27/2011
Hmm. Interesting. Is this before or after Alena and the Morph Machine? Also, what other stories involve these characters?
The Ghost-Ninja Guy chapter 11 . 6/7/2010
I can't help but have this feeling that the mention of a chaotic version of Arceus is a reference to the character Crazy Hand from the Super Smash Bros. series.
Descriptivist chapter 5 . 6/6/2010
Alena's Pokemon... really aren't taking this seriously enough.
Descriptivist chapter 4 . 6/6/2010
Electrinz is pretty confident that he knows exactly what moves Alena would want to learn.
Lixie Lorn chapter 11 . 6/6/2010
Will she WANT to go back..?

NeoPikaShipping for the win.

Felix Lorn of CRITIC, also known as General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows and Servant To That Which Waits, Senshi of the Many Moons and Sailor Elara, Scion of Bramimond and He Who Lulz With Cats, The Kinetic Impact and the Red Fist, the Ninja Hippo and She Who Has Glee, Seer of Callan and Master of the Bishie Plane, Priestess of the Numberless Gods and Keeper of the EXY Borderline, Harbinger of the Unreal and Sorceress of the Unknown, Master of the Five Styles and Prophet of the Shipping Goddess, Dancer of the Wind, Fangirl Among Fangirls and Defier of Birth and Nature, Walker of the Thousand Paths and She Who Only Seeks Home, out.
WyldClaw chapter 10 . 6/5/2010
Holy cow! there is another arceus? was it evil and that's why it was banished?
Frozen Archer chapter 10 . 5/31/2010
... That was... unexpected...

I'm glad I clicked on this story, it's really interesting so far and I can't wait to read more! Though, there have been a few spots that I've noticed could've been fixed so maybe be a bit more careful when you revise?

Anyways, I hope you update soon!
Lixie Lorn chapter 10 . 5/31/2010
...did NOT expect that. ._.

Felix Lorn of CRITIC, also known as General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows and Servant To That Which Waits, Senshi of the Many Moons and Sailor Elara, Scion of Bramimond and He Who Lulz With Cats, The Kinetic Impact and the Red Fist, the Ninja Hippo and She Who Has Glee, Seer of Callan and Master of the Bishie Plane, Priestess of the Numberless Gods and Keeper of the EXY Borderline, Harbinger of the Unreal and Sorceress of the Unknown, Master of the Five Styles and Prophet of the Shipping Goddess, Dancer of the Wind, Fangirl Among Fangirls and Defier of Birth and Nature, Walker of the Thousand Paths and She Who Only Seeks Home, out.
WyldClaw chapter 4 . 5/26/2010
Wow! So she turned into a pikachu!
narutodragon chapter 9 . 5/1/2010
nice
deathleader chapter 9 . 4/26/2010
lol this great
Lixie Lorn chapter 9 . 4/26/2010
Heh. Awesomeness.

One thing though, you italicised 'he had said.' in between Arceus' speaking.

Also: Goat with wheel stuck to his side. Heh.

Stormy
deathleader chapter 8 . 4/12/2010
plz update soon
Lixie Lorn chapter 8 . 3/28/2010
Oh. So much Ship. XD

Felix Lorn of CRITIC, also known as General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and the Last Hairlander, S/He Who Knows and Servant To That Which Waits, Senshi of the Many Moons and Sailor Elara, Scion of Bramimond and He Who Lulz With Cats, The Kinetic Impact and the Red Fist, the Ninja Hippo and She Who Has Glee, Seer of Callan and Master of the Bishie Plane, Priestess of the Numberless Gods and Keeper of the EXY Borderline, Harbinger of the Unreal and Sorcerer of the Unknown, Master of the Five Styles, Dancer of the Wind, Fangirl Among Fangirls and Defier of Birth and Nature, Walker of the Thousand Paths and She Who Only Seeks Home, out.
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