Reviews for Wolfmother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is quite an interesting story so far. I admit to not following the harry potter series closely, but this was a joy to read. I am especially interested in seeing how the wolf-girl as harry put it does in Hogwarts. keep up the great work we are eagerly awaiting more chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful language. INTERESTING start. Not to sure about the characters' entry. The executioner and Pink I can see, but the Minister? And since apparition tests begin at 17, you're not going post-hog... Yeah, I'm curious. I love writing that steps outside, and this, not only in form but in content, promises to do that. There are a few rough spots - sometimes, you seem to be concentrating on the melody of the language (not just the main character's, there's a real rhythm going overall) and end up with contradictions in information. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting description. I enjoy Fiona's thought process. Reminds me of myself. And she is absolutely ruthless when dealing with enemies. A sought after attribute. Well written, I hope you will continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Different, yet interesting. I'll keep an eye on this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing style. It is witty and enjoyable to read. Encore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amusing, just enough power to be interesting without broken. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... i absolutly love it! your story is very origonal and well read! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. I can't wait to read more. :) |