|Reviews for Trial and a LOT of Error|
| Love chapter 5 . 9/17/2012
Oh my God! I freakin love this story you must continue!
| Tethla Magus chapter 5 . 1/24/2012
I love this story but there a couple things wrong. When Shion met up with Allen, it was on Fifth Jerusalem. Second Miltia was not playabe in game three. Old Miltia was only that short time and Shion and Allen were together on Old Miltia. I'm not saying you have to change it, I'm just putting the fact out there. Oh and I just love this story! Keep it up!
| masterthief-extrodinare chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
I absolutely love this fanfiction! It is very well writtten and I love your OC. I seriously hope you continue writing this fanfiction.
| startscribbling12 chapter 2 . 2/28/2010
great story! please continue this!
| RavenholtEX chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Hey, great first chapter. Are you going to continue this story? I'm the last person that should preach about continuing stories (I've only ever written one chapter, then my life got so hectic I never continued it - don't even remember what it was about, actually), but I really liked how you're getting this started. Figured you might like a review to get you motivated (That was one of my problems - I figured no one was reading it, so why bother finishing it?), so here you go. I like your style of writing, and you grabbed the audience's (or at least mine) right off the bat, which is great. Your OC seems really likable and fun, which was surprising for me; I usually don't like OCs or OC/Existing character pairings, but the quality of what you've written made me suspend that initial dislike. Good work, and good luck on future chapters!