Reviews for Rough Around the Edges
Djinn17 chapter 20 . 3/28/2010
Just read it again. You teaser! Damn you! Hurry up with the next chapter...
G-man chapter 20 . 3/28/2010
out of curiosity did you get any hints for plot development and monster design from say tremors? And by hint I mean bloodily rips off with as much shame and emotion as the fucking borg collective. However this is one small part in a much bigger collective that has a rather chirpy charm to it so I can't complain to much.
brokenheartsandtwistedminds chapter 20 . 3/28/2010
No! Mosyk!

That's not the end is it?

I still lurve this story, lotsa humour! Lol ;)
Djinn17 chapter 20 . 3/27/2010
Very interesting. he gets his kiss and a future mate, but he has to face an ugly and deadly underground critter. Im eager to read the next chapter! great stuff
Lady Faucheur chapter 20 . 3/27/2010

Ah well. At least Endyn and Mosky finally kissed XD
Saran VD chapter 20 . 3/27/2010


love the thing with endyna... so cute! _

if you kill mosyk, ill be very angry... i may have to hurt something... *cracks knuckles*

so dont kill him.


HJP265 chapter 20 . 3/27/2010
no I didn't think it was going to be easy but I still hate you for doing this...

but I love you because Mosyk and Endyna kissed. They KISSED! happened

so now go back and write the next chapter because right now I'm dying here because I want to know what will happen next
HJP265 chapter 19 . 3/24/2010
i just love this story

by the way the chapter was really good...but a little bit too short...but at the end I couldn't stop laughing (and that was because of your endcomment xD)
Saran VD chapter 19 . 3/23/2010
Aw... can't wait to see this shenanigans go down! Update soon! :D
Lady Faucheur chapter 19 . 3/23/2010
Your note at the end made me laugh XD

Oh, excitment. Let us hope Mosyk doesn't die and he can then finally mate with Endyna.

) Please update soon )
txontaw chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
"If someone or something were to run above ground towards the gorge, the na'ring ska'ayu would follow it quickly - it won't come up until its target slows or stops moving - and by the time it got to the gorge and the target stopped, it would burst through the Cliffside and fall into the river."

- Someone has watched Tremors... ;)

All in all its a good read. I've enjoyed it tremendously and can't wait to see where it goes.
Codeless Enigma chapter 19 . 3/22/2010
You portray the characters accurately. To say the least.
1Timberwolf chapter 19 . 3/22/2010 horny little alien bastard. LOL. Yup. He's a teenager alright. LOL. Fingers are crossed that he pulls this off being bait, can't wait for the next chapter.
brokenheartsandtwistedminds chapter 18 . 3/21/2010
Haha! I love this fanfiction, very good and funny!

You earned a:



- Annie
brokenheartsandtwistedminds chapter 15 . 3/19/2010
Aw! That chapter was so sweet! I love the way that Nyra is afraid of the dark - Even Ikran have their weaknesses!
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