|Reviews for Fleeting Photograph|
| Catmint chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
There are a couple of typos in this, just to give you a heads-up. This is sweet, adorable and really nicely written. I love it.
| Agent Striker chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
AWESOME!1 loved that pic in the show too!
| Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Lovely story! I do think that the photograph was a very defining moment. I love how you can bring out Tony's thoughts and emotions, and how you can define his love for Ziva :)
| Prissy and Bregan chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Loved this line:
"They had discovered to their absolute horror/shock/whatever the hell that weird jumpy feeling they felt in their gut was-that they had to share a room. And a bed."
And I know what you mean by having to write this. Jetlag is after all, THE BEST TIVA NCIS EPISODE EVER (at least until the episode when Tony and Ziva actually do admit that they ARE Tiva).
Nobody else focused very much on the photo, which actually struck me as odd. But this is such a great fanfiction devoted to that moment, that of course, I had to add it into my c2 community, which is devoted entirely to the greatest TIVA NCIS episode ever: Jetlag.
And Tony's thoughts as he takes the picture, they're sweet, sort of how I think everyone imagines what Tony thinks about past the GSM magazine covers and food. And its still very much Tony. Great job keeping him in character.
I can only hope that you subscribe to the community as well and show your support for Jet Lag. But mostly I wanted you to know what a great piece of fiction you've produced for me to enjoy.
And I hope you write that extra one you were teasing about. I know already that I'd add it.
| Viktorija chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
| BurningxRedxCaskett chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
aww, i loved this story! Jetlag was so Tiva packed I was like a kid in a candy store with all the Tiva we got :) is there possibly going to be more...or is this just a oneshot? either way...i loved it!
| 11nivea342 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
maybe my favorite jet lag piece. :) just so lovely. love the slap upside his head in the hotel and then having to care for her nightmares. i'dlike to think somethign like that happened during the night to bring them closer. then the heartbreaking part about it being more natural for her to fight with knives than be relaxed on a vacation... very sad. but probably true.
and the last line? perfect ;)
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
that was good loved it
| NYT chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Except for the part where Ziva has a nightmare (because Tony said she looked comfortable (or something like that) when she mentioned his not sleeping well) It was great. Really. :)
| Katharen Silver chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
OH I love this! It was so cute. You did a wonderful job. )
| Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
On a first note, happy birthday to you! Now for the second note . . . . this was AMAZING. Beautifully amazing.
| Betherzz chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
the 2 of them just need to get over themselves and get their shit together and give it a chance, they will only regret it later if they dont even try. nothing worse than regret. they are running out of chances and one day that thought of maybe i will tell him or her tomorrow will not be a possibility, they will wake up one day the other one will be gone, with someone else or even dead. that last option is the worst it can get but they need to do something now because there just might not be that tomorrow.
| Megwolf13 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
| mar-hhr4ever chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
there are so many Jetlag one shots right now and it's hard to find one that really stands out. but yours does, in every way. It is exactly as I imagine it.
| jacksrevenge chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
oh how i love insight into the mind of Tony DiNozzo. i love the way you explained what happened when they shared a bed, it was subtle but very sweet. (and also explains why she was in a mood that was not as pleasant as Tony's! god, im such a stickler for everything being in canon and in character.) you also have a very good grip on vocabulary, which is refreshing after reading a lot of... well, crappy fanfiction. this story was light, insightful, and very enjoyable to read.
great job! :]