Reviews for Atlas
CN7 chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
I really liked this. Excellent opening chapter.
SakuBloss chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
Really sweet start. Loved it :)
coty chapter 6 . 2/22/2013
this entire story was beautiful
MEChuckster chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I love reading Mass Effect romance fan fiction, particularly Miranda's because we didn't really get to see much with Shepard and Miranda's relationship. This is really good, going straight to favorites :)
Guest chapter 6 . 5/18/2012
Beautiful story loved it.
xXserialkillerXx chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
37000 words pretty much describing the events of two days, and almost solely focusing on Shepard/Miranda relationship, thats an achievements, especially considering the incredibly high quality.

You should really try to write something more, maybe a sequel to this? Or something entirely new?
commandocucumber chapter 6 . 8/29/2011
I'm not usually one for snuff. I find it needs context, at the very least. But i'm a pathetic sucker for anything Shep/Miri related, so...

You did a really good job on the entire thing, though. You gave it wieght without making it sappy, and that's not an easy thing to do. The smut wasn't smutty (In other words it actually means something and is not just fan service), and that's not an easy thing to do either, so good job. You've got talent.
The Grinning Psychopath chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
HAH whatdoyouknow we both named our Shepard Adrian.. i named him for the Marine in Half Like Opposing Force.. did you do the same? if so rock on. heheheeeh hah looks good so far. i myself too destroyed the base the first time around.. then when i played my second Adrian Shepard and romanced Jack.. then i just killed all the collectors and left the base standing... pretty much no one was happy about this not even Miranda... only Me and Illusive Man
Shananigan chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
This fic was brilliant. Great characterizations and beautiful transitions.
13Commander chapter 6 . 6/26/2011
Man ... I am simply speechless I can not express my words for your story, it is so filled with love that it made my cry ... even the love scene between Shepard and Miri ... made me Freakin' cry it is not pornographic it is simply ... Hell i can't put word into it but I hope you understand
Mana Tatsumiya chapter 6 . 6/11/2011
Damn, this was epic. Very nice job.
Streetlightgeek17 chapter 2 . 4/11/2011
Wow. Sexy yet not overdone, well written, and all in a language that was pretty much designed to screw with foreign learners. Color me awed.
SergiusTheGreat chapter 2 . 4/7/2011
You gotta be kidding me... Third language? Your writing skills are VERY GOOD. Sure, some misplaced commas and words... I wish, however, that some people in this website could write like you. Not even with having English as their first language do they write good.

Excellent story by the way.

-Sergius
ML-LawBringer chapter 6 . 3/28/2011
Wow, I'm really glad you updated and finished your story. And I just loved it, hot and cute. Hopefully this wasn't the last fic we read from you, we need more M!Shep/Miranda fic around here.

Best wishes!
Stradivarium chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
I was pleasantly surprised when I received a notification in my email about a new chapter being uploaded for this fantastic story. While tit did take quite some time, I think it was well wroth the wait. Fantastic job as always. Would like to see more Miri/Shep fics from you. :D
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