|Reviews for One Night|
| Kintama-Hime chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Given that Hinamori is mentioned, the captain in question can't be Urahara. I think this could be Shunsui and the pov character Jushiro.
It could also be Renji and Kira, but I can't see Rukia behaving so badly.
Very powerful fic though. I feel for the pov character who s obviously in love with the captain.
| Prussia16 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This was awesome! 3 I love how you didn't add names, so anyone could place any pair they wanted in this! OH THE ANGST! But of course I choose AiGin.3 ;3 Keep writing and thank you for doing so, my dear.
| Good Omens chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I'm guessing you didn't really have two real characters in your head when you wrote this because I can't really make this fit any of the captains except maybe Shunsui and then I can't imagine the woman who's pouring him tea...
Unless maybe it's a male? Then I could fit in Jyuushiro. But that would make the 'felt uncomfortable between my legs, sticky and wet,' part a bit difficult to place correctly.
I'm kind of curious of who you had in mind now. :O Especially who the cheating woman was.
| SinsofMidnight chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
... It's very sad for her, to be give that close of a realization, only to have it torn from her grasp.
Well written, and enjoyed! But sad.
| InosBane chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Damnit...this was awesome.
| Ingrey chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
That was really good, very intense feelings, and all...
I still try to figure out which pairing you had in your mind when writing this. Is this cheating woman an existing character? So there was a captain with a stuble and a person serving tea who are connected through a long friendship? Somehow that reminds me of Kyoraku and Ukitake.
| Firisu chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
Aw, so sad.
Overall, a beautiful piece.
Nice job. ;]
| rihanna86 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
hey very nicely written...pretty sad though...my guess for the pair..hm..."Renji" & "Rukia"